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Thesis: Political Allegories expose how political intentions are concealed through the façade
of liberty.

Textual Grounding : Within Orwell’s Animal Farm, the pig’s manipulation of the principles of
the revolution to enable the gradual accumulation of power, falsely advocating the ideals of
freedom and equality.

CP Concept technique Quote Effect

Orwell reveals the attainment utopian vision “Tyrant man symbolising
of power shall be freedom and
offering agency overthrown”, prosperity that
and freedom universally
encourages
“even the
stupidest” into
political action.
Orwell thus how the abuse So it was agreed highlighting the
condemns of power without further abuse of power
engenders argument that of the pigs
revolution, the milk and taking
the winfill advantage of
apples …. the
Should be intellectually
reserved for the vulnerable
pigs alone”, working class.
Orwell conveys how power is “Boxer could reveals the
maintained not get beyond vulnerability of
through the the letter D. He the masses to
manipulation of would trace the political
individuals who back to ABCD” promise of
lack the liberty.
intellect to
recognize their
exploitation

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Thesis: Political Allegories exposes how human ignorance enables the exploitation of
individuals.

Textual Grounding : Within Orwell’s Animal Farm, the pig’s exploit the lack of intelligence of
the working class animals, upholding their corrupt authority.
 Orwell depicts how Napoleon “ so the animals foreshadowing
exploits his trooped down the corruption
power to satisfy the hayfield to and power of
greed begin the the pigs to
harvest, and enable their
when they greed
came back in
the evening it
was noticed
that the milk
had
disappearing”,
Orwell condems how vividly depicted “they are taking symbolises the
exploitation of through boxer’s you to your willingness of
oppressed death death corrupt
working class authority to
animals betray those
devalues most loyal to
individuals the revolution
callously
discarded for
“another box of
whiskey”.
Orwell further how Patriotic “whenever utilising rhetoric
depicts propaganda insistence anything went as a mechanism
enables corrupt wrong it of Control.
authority became usual
figures to to attribute it to
exploit the snowball
working class

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Thesis:

Political allegories expose how exploited individuals are devalued within the cyclical

evolution of tyranny.

Textual Grounding:
With Orwell’s Animal Farm the corruption of the pigs undermines the revolution enabling an

oppression worse than their original conditions under Mr Jones.

Orwell depicts A cyclical nature “He carried a Symbolising his

of Tyranny whip in his oppressive

introduces trotter”, tactics.

corruption by

high class

individuals

Undermining conveying how “ All animals are highlights the

the the revolution is the same but pigs’ greed and

commandment corrupted when some are more willingness to

that “whatever their equal than forsake their

goes on four foundational others”, fellow animals

legs is a friend”, principles are for their own

subverted interests.

Condemning the inability of subverts the

the failure of the animals to fairy-tale motif

revolution to discern of

meet their aims between pig to transformation

man and from highlighting

man to pig…. : how power can

but already it corrupt leaders,

was impossible enabling

to say which tyranny

was which”