How to write a

landing page
title
With examples
🔴 Too vague.

🔴 Highlighted
word 'video'.

🔴 Wordy
subheading.

🟢 'Publish-worthy',
outcome-focused
title.

🟢 'Day one', tells

easy to use.

🟢 Short and crisp

subheading.
 🔴 Difficult to
understand what
they actually do.

🔴 Wordy
subheading.

🔴 Just features, no
pain points.

🟢 Tells you exactly

what to expect.

🟢 Percentage in
heading ❤️

🟢 No features, just
explains what buyers
must be thinking next.
Yes, the %.
 🔴 Can't
understand what
they do.

🔴 Until you read

the subheading.

🟢 Pain point focused

headling.

⭕ Little too wordy, but

explains what to
expect.
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