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How to Write a Discussion Section for a


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We’ve talked about several useful writing tips that authors Search...
should consider while drafting or editing their research
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In a nutshell, your Discussion fulfills the promise you


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Discussion section?
As we stated above, the goal of your Discussion section is
to answer the questions you raise in your Introduction
by using the results you collected during your research.
The content you include in the Discussions segment should
include the following information:

1. Remind us why we should be interested in this


research project.

2. Describe the nature of the knowledge gap you were


trying to fill using the results of your study.

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3. Don’t repeat your Introduction. Instead, focus on


why this particular study was needed to fill the gap
you noticed and why that gap needed filling in the
first place.

4. Mainly, you want to remind us of how your research


will increase our knowledge base and inspire others
to conduct further research.

5. Clearly tell us what that piece of missing knowledge


was.

6. Answer each of the questions you asked in your


Introduction and explain how your results support
those conclusions.

7. Make sure to factor in all results relevant to the


questions (even if those results were not statistically
significant).

8. Focus on the significance of the most noteworthy


results.

9. If conflicting inferences can be drawn from your


results, evaluate the merits of all of them.

10. Don’t rehash what you said earlier in the Results


section. Rather, discuss your findings in the context of
answering your hypothesis. Instead of making
statements like “[The first result] was this…,” say,
“[The first result] suggests [conclusion].”

11. Do your conclusions line up with existing literature?

12. Discuss whether your findings agree with current


knowledge and expectations.

13. Keep in mind good persuasive argument skills, such


as explaining the strengths of your arguments and

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highlighting the weaknesses of contrary opinions.

14. If you discovered something unexpected, o"er


reasons. If your conclusions aren’t aligned with
current literature, explain.

15. Address any limitations of your study and how


relevant they are to interpreting your results and
validating your findings.

16. Make sure to acknowledge any weaknesses in your


conclusions and suggest room for further research
concerning that aspect of your analysis.

17. Make sure your suggestions aren’t ones that should


have been conducted during your research! Doing so
might raise questions about your initial research
design and protocols.

18. Similarly, maintain a critical but unapologetic tone.


You want to instill confidence in your readers that you
have thoroughly examined your results and have
objectively assessed them in a way that would benefit
the scientific community’s desire to expand our
knowledge base.

19. Recommend next steps.

20. Your suggestions should inspire other researchers to


conduct follow-up studies to build upon the
knowledge you have shared with them.

21. Keep the list short (no more than two).

How to Write the Discussion


Section
The above list of what to include in the Discussion section

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gives an overall idea of what you need to focus on


throughout the section. Below are some tips and general
suggestions about the technical aspects of writing and
organization that you might find useful as you draft or
revise the contents we’ve outlined above.

Technical writing elements


1. Embrace active voice because it eliminates the
awkward phrasing and wordiness that accompanies
passive voice.

2. Use the present tense, which should also be


employed in the Introduction.

3. Sprinkle with first person pronouns if needed, but


generally, avoid it. We want to focus on your findings.

4. Maintain an objective and analytical tone.

Discussion section organization


1. Keep the same flow across the Results, Methods, and
Discussion sections.

2. We develop a rhythm as we read and parallel


structures facilitate our comprehension. When you
organize information the same way in each of these
related parts of your journal manuscript, we can
quickly see how a certain result was interpreted and
quickly verify the particular methods used to produce
that result.

3. Notice how using parallel structure will eliminate


extra narration in the Discussion part since we can
anticipate the flow of your ideas based on what we
read in the Results segment. Reducing wordiness is

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important when you only have a few paragraphs to


devote to the Discussion section!

4. Within each subpart of a Discussion, the information


should flow as follows: (A) conclusion first, (B) relevant
results and how they relate to that conclusion and (C)
relevant literature.

5. End with a concise summary explaining the big-


picture impact of your study on our understanding of
the subject matter. At the beginning of your
Discussion section, you stated why this particular
study was needed to fill the gap you noticed and why
that gap needed filling in the first place. Now, it is
time to end with “how your research filled that gap.”

Discussion Part 1: Summarizing Key


Findings
Begin the Discussion section by restating your statement of
the problem and briefly summarizing the major results. Do
not simply repeat your findings. Rather, try to create a
concise statement of the main results that directly answer
the central research question that you stated in the
Introduction section. This content should not be longer
than one paragraph in length.

Many researchers struggle with understanding the precise


di"erences between a Discussion section and a Results
section. The most important thing to remember here is
that your Discussion section should subjectively evaluate
the findings presented in the Results section, and in
relatively the same order. Keep these sections distinct by
making sure that you do not repeat the findings without
providing an interpretation.

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Phrase examples: Summarizing the


results
The findings indicate that …

These results suggest a correlation between A and B


The data present here suggest that …

An interpretation of the findings reveals a connection


between…

Discussion Part 2: Interpreting the


Findings
What do the results mean? It may seem obvious to you, but
simply looking at the figures in the Results section will not
necessarily convey to readers the importance of the
findings in answering your research questions.

The exact structure of interpretations depends on the type


of research being conducted. Here are some common
approaches to interpreting data:

Identifying correlations and relationships in the


findings

Explaining whether the results confirm or undermine


your research hypothesis

Giving the findings context within the history of


similar research studies

Discussing unexpected results and analyzing their


significance to your study or general research

O"ering alternative explanations and arguing for


your position

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Organize the Discussion section around key arguments,


themes, hypotheses, or research questions or problems.
Again, make sure to follow the same order as you did in the
Results section.

Discussion Part 3: Discussing the


Implications
In addition to providing your own interpretations, show
how your results fit into the wider scholarly literature you
surveyed in the literature review section. This section is
called the implications of the study. Show where and how
these results fit into existing knowledge, what additional
insights they contribute, and any possible consequences
that might arise from this knowledge, both in the specific
research topic and in the wider scientific domain.

Questions to ask yourself when dealing with potential


implications:

Do your findings fall in line with existing theories, or


do they challenge these theories or findings? What
new information do they contribute to the literature,
if any? How exactly do these findings impact or
conflict with existing theories or models?

What are the practical implications on actual subjects


or demographics?

What are the methodological implications for similar


studies conducted either in the past or future?

Your purpose in giving the implications is to spell out


exactly what your study has contributed and why
researchers and other readers should be interested.

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Phrase examples: Discussing the


implications of the research
These results confirm the existing evidence in X
studies…

The results are not in line with the foregoing theory


that…

This experiment provides new insights into the


connection between…

These findings present a more nuanced


understanding of…

While previous studies have focused on X, these


results demonstrate that Y.

Step 4: Acknowledging the


limitations
All research has study limitations of one sort or another.
Acknowledging limitations in methodology or approach
helps strengthen your credibility as a researcher. Study
limitations are not simply a list of mistakes made in the
study. Rather, limitations help provide a more detailed
picture of what can or cannot be concluded from your
findings. In essence, they help temper and qualify the
study implications you listed previously.

Study limitations can relate to research design,


specific methodological or material choices, or unexpected
issues that emerged while you conducted the research.
Mention only those limitations directly relate to your
research questions, and explain what impact these
limitations had on how your study was conducted and the
validity of any interpretations.

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Possible types of study limitations:

Insu#cient sample size for statistical measurements

Lack of previous research studies on the topic

Methods/instruments/techniques used to collect the


data

Limited access to data

Time constraints in properly preparing and executing


the study

After discussing the study limitations, you can also stress


that your results are still valid. Give some specific reasons
why the limitations do not necessarily handicap your study
or narrow its scope.

Phrase examples: Limitations


sentence beginners
“There may be some possible limitations in this
study.”

“The findings of this study have to be seen in light of


some limitations.”

“The first limitation is the…The second limitation


concerns the…”

“The empirical results reported herein should be


considered in the light of some limitations.”

“This research, however, is subject to several


limitations.”

“The primary limitation to the generalization of these


results is…”

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“Nonetheless, these results must be interpreted with


caution and a number of limitations should be borne
in mind.”

Discussion Part 5: Giving


Recommendations for Further
Research
Based on your interpretation and discussion of the
findings, your recommendations can include practical
changes to the study or specific further research to be
conducted to clarify the research questions.
Recommendations are often listed in a separate Conclusion
section, but often this is just the final paragraph of the
Discussion section.

Suggestions for further research often stem directly from


the limitations outlined. Rather than simply stating that
“further research should be conducted,” provide concrete
specifics for how future can help answer questions that
your research could not.

Phrase examples: Recommendation


sentence beginners
Further research is needed to establish …

There is abundant space for further progress in


analyzing…

A further study with more focus on X should be done


to investigate…

Further studies of X that account for these variables


must be undertaken.

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As you edit or draft your research manuscript, we hope
that you implement these guidelines to produce a more
e"ective Discussion section. And after completing your
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For additional information about how to write a strong


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writing series!

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Additional Academic Resources


Guide for Authors. (Elsevier)

How to Write the Results Section of a Research


Paper. (Bates College)

Structure of a Research Paper. (University of


Minnesota Biomedical Library)

How to Choose a Target Journal (Springer)

How to Write Figures and Tables (UNC Writing


Center)

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