SL Written Commentary-Criteria marks and teacher marking comments

A. Choice & A. Choice &

A. Supporting Application Analysis of data
documents of tools, theories and and integration D. E. F G.
techniques of ideas Conclusion Evaluation Structure Presentation

3/4 3/5 3/5 2/3 2/4 2/2 2/2

Total Marks: 17/25

Comments:
Research question framed like BM HL IA. The supporting documents are relevant and sufficiently in-depth.
There is an appropriate selection of business management tools, techniques and theories, but these are
applied. There is an appropriate selection of data from the supporting documents with satisfactory analysis.
Some conclusions are consistent with the evidence presented and some judgments are substantiated.
Overall, good presentation.