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Brandon Huynh - Task 2 - Creative Writing Assessment
Brandon Huynh - Task 2 - Creative Writing Assessment
The peaceful, white birds flew gracefully over clear blue skies, looking down on a village
as if they were guarding it. The elegant trees were swaying side to side in perfect
rhythm, reflecting the civilised and harmonious villagers. Of course, there was always
the odd instance in which some complications arose, but everyone generally got along
well; obeying laws and respecting authorities. The village was preserved very well, with
the intricately crafted buildings aging back many decades. The old, wooden walls of the
houses were polished so well, it felt like they were brand new, in contrast to the stone
floorings which gave off an old fashioned feel. At the heart of the village was a tower
which contained a valuable chest, one which hasn’t been touched since the start of the
civilisation. Although it’s very well protected, not a single soul in the village knows the
contents of it. Resources around the village were very scarce, so a social hierarchy had
to be implemented strongly into the community in order to keep the village running
Everyone in the lower classes had their fair share of tough times, but Jesse had it
particularly tough. Working all day barely earnt him enough money to pay for food,
clothing, and shelter, but ever since the shortage of resources in the village, crime rates
rose higher than ever. What was once a prospering community had quickly become an
unsafe place to live, with robbers causing havoc every single night. Unfortunately for
Jesse, he was caught red-handed when attempting to steal the mysterious chest from
the tower, and he had earned himself an exile from the village.
On his way out of the village, he took one last glance for forgiveness, but no glances
were given back. Never would he have thought something like this would happen to
him, so he didn't really know where to go from here. Looking around the misty forest,
the only thing he could see or hear was the sound of hummingbirds chirping their hearts
out. With every cautious step he took, he had no idea where he was going; he was
simply following the chee-dits of the hummingbirds. He eventually reached a lake and
immediately rushed over to it as if his life depended on it, panting for air between each
gulp of water. As he stared down at his devilish reflection in the water, he noticed a lot of
birds flying in a certain direction. He couldn’t help but wonder where the birds were
headed and as the old saying goes, curiosity killed the cat. Without another thought,
Jesse decided to follow the birds, not having any idea where they were leading him. All
of a sudden there were no more birds to be seen in the sky; it was as if they had
disappeared.
Confused, he looked around, trying to find out where the birds went, and that's when he
saw them all unconscious on the ground. Puzzled as to why the birds were unconscious
on the ground, he looked around and noticed a wall; a wall that was so high it touched
the sky. Enticed as to what mysteries are held on the other side, he picked up the
biggest rock he could find and with all his might, he threw it at the wall, with only a small
scratch to show for it. After an hour of trying to break the wall, he knew it would take
ages to break through it by himself. So he came to the realization that he needed help
to take it down, so without wasting any more time, he looked around for the smoke
coming from the village bonfire, and then he commenced his journey back to his village.
After a few hours of walking, at last, he had reached his village but upon entry, he was
greeted by nasty looks. Within a few seconds of stepping foot into the village, warriors
immediately rushed over to seize him, escorting him to the village chief. Confused as to
why Jesse came back to the village, the chief questioned why he returned, and he
received an enthusiastic answer from Jesse, who explained how he had found a wall.
Due to Jesse’s past, the chief had no reason to believe that he was telling the truth; but
since resources were becoming scarce, the chief decided to trust Jesse for the sake of
the village. Jesse then guided a few dozen men equipped with weapons and a battering
ram through the forest, being precautious with every step they took.
Eventually, they reached the wall and the chief realised that Jesse was telling the truth,
so without wasting another second, they immediately started barging into the wall with
the battering ram. After a while of constant battering on the border, to their surprise,
they managed to create a hole in the wall, but instead of finding a pathway to more
resources, they had created a hole in the glass bottle which they didn’t realise they were
living in. Suddenly water gushed in through the hole, and within moments, the water had
swept everyone off their feet. However, no one had any prior knowledge as to how to