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Scattered Narrative and Scattered Character: Perpetual trauma and power Relation
It is sometimes hard for young adults like university students to leave their hometown
and go far away to attend college, let alone children of very young age. However, owing to
colonialisation, tens of thousands of indigenous children were forced to separate from their
original families, culturally genocide by the residential school system. Except for forcibly
forbidding children to acknowledge their Indigenous heritage and culture or to speak their own
languages, which claimed to “civilize” them, residential schools made these Aboriginals undergo
horrendous abuse on physical, sexual, emotional, and psychological levels (Hanson et al 1). This
dark history was projected on an individual’s traumatic experience by Eden Robinson. Her work
“Queen of the North” tells the story of an indigenous girl Adelaine, who was sexually abused by
her uncle Josh from an early age and grows up with pain and degeneration, failing her first
would-be serious romantic relationship with Jimmy. The boat Queen of the North is an important
image of trauma, which appears at the beginning and the end of this short story, leaving more
space for us readers to further reflect on how trauma comes back and forth in individuals’ lives.
By applying a non-linear plot organization, Robinson concretizes the way trauma works on the
human brain. Focusing on narratives and characters, this essay will analyse Adelaine’s
characteristics from Robinson’s use of fragmented narrative and try to uncover the power
relation underlying this abnormal coming-of-age story. This essay will first examine the
protagonist’s intellect and morality in a cause-effect relation, then delve into her emotions and
finally, elaborate on the trauma from the perspective of power relation and the image of the boat.
perception of the world affects her moral judgments—as a victim of sexual abuse, Adelaine later
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becomes a bully and takes revenge on Uncle Josh. This could be seen in Robinson’s fragmented
depictions: she chooses to give the readers a direct clue by inserting a childhood memory of the
protagonist. “Uncle Josh undoes his pants…When it’s over he’ll have treats for me” and
Adelaine admits “it’s painful (Robinson 348).” But Adelaine chooses to not cry as a very
depressed way of expressing emotion. A similar thing happens when she is harassed by a white
male custom in Vancouver, although feeling “A hundred stupid answers came to my head,” she
replies with the least aggressive answer “Haisla, and you (Robinson 358)?” As Gayatri
Chakravorty Spivak argued: “…the subaltern has no history and cannot speak, the subaltern as
long-term sexual abuse by her uncle and the white gaze from a stranger. She realizes this is not
right, but still responds as a subaltern. These experiences finally lead to her moral downfall—by
taking on a powerful behavioural way and revenge. Robinson scatters Adelaine’s bullying deeds,
which perpetuate and appear sporadically throughout the whole story. These violent experiences
happen mostly in Adelaine’s adolescence, sometimes she is the one who takes the power and
bullies others, and others are simply violent quarrels and fights. Near the end of the story,
Adelaine attempts to end this unethical relationship with Josh by uncovering the truth of Josh’s
abuse by Priest Archibald and leaving him the hatbox gift. This, to a certain extent, is Adelaine’s
way of avenging Josh. Thus, Adelaine finally shares the same moral standard as the inflictors.
The Vice, then, becomes an endless circle passed on between the bullies and the victims. It is
Adelaine’s intellectual perception of the vicious deeds and the depressive manner she takes that
passive way of expressing emotion. This could also be demonstrated through her dealing with
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intimate relationships. Still, Robinson breaks the chronological way of organizing plots but
manages to merge them together randomly, and she also uses dreams to indicate Adelaine’s
underlying desires. In reality, Adelaine seems to develop a trust issue when dealing with her
relationships. A distinct event is when she tries to tell the truth to her cousin Ronny and would-be
boyfriend Jimmy. Facing Ronny, she is about to tell her but is ruined by Ronny’s over-drinking.
But inside, one can still sense her hesitation: “What was the point? She had a big mouth, … [if I
tell her she may] shout to the world (Robinson 347).” She does not trust Ronny, even though
they have done so many intimate things and Ronny may be the only female good friend of hers.
Similarly, when confronting Jimmy, she “almost tell[s] him then. [She] wanted to tell him. [She]
wanted someone else to know and not have it locked inside [her] (Robinson 347).” But
considering twice, she still decides not to pour out and asks herself: “What was the point? He’d
probably pull away from me in horror, disgusted, revolted (Robinson 354).” She again, hesitates,
but this time with more terrified feelings—she is afraid—afraid of being hated by Jimmy, of
ruining her relationship with him. This shows that she does not trust herself and does not believe
a person like her deserves happiness. With twice failed communication in a similar situation, it is
clear that Adelaine’s traumatic experience prevented her from having a regular healthy
relationship with others. Besides, her dreams serve as significant hints of her inner desires. In the
first dream, she dismembered Josh, which suggests her hatred for him. The second time her
dream of Jimmy’s drowning prophets the plots and also indicates her interior fear of losing
Jimmy. Dreams are the outlet of her depressive emotions, through which the readers can peep at
From Adelaine’s intellect, morality and emotions, it is clear that all these aspects are
affected by her childhood sexual abuse of her uncle Josh, while Josh, was too, abused by his
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residential school’s teacher Archibald. This circle of vice thus creates two layers of power
hierarchy. Representing the residential school’s authority, Archibald is a figure of the colonizer
who takes on the name of “civilized” but abuses kids from colonialized indigenous people.
Within the indigenous society, Josh represents a patriarchal figure who takes on the name of “for
your good” or “special treatment” but abuses individual females like Adelaine. Yet the “for your
own good” becomes a lie of these inflictors as a means of pulling strings and manipulating those
who are less powerful than them, stating: “I am the one who owns the power. You are the one
who benefits from me so shut up and be submissive.” However, the “beneficiaries” have been
neglected, no matter how traumatic these abuses could be to them. Robinson applies a strategic
method to present trauma: the whole narrative is an imitation of how trauma works on the human
brain. The metaphor of the boat Queen of the North, which appears at the beginning, sets an
overall tone for the whole story, indicating that when trauma comes back to you, sometimes you
may be “frozen where [you] stand, waiting for [it] to come ashore (Robinson 345).” Although the
boat itself does not appear again until the end of this story, the trauma, along with all the
violence, over-drinking, and drug abuse scattered the whole narrative as fragmented pieces.
Robinson imitates the memory disorder that certain traumatic experiences would cause,
organising the plots in a nonlinear way and shattering the violent scenes into pieces to concretize
the ongoing trauma. Near the end, Jimmy gets on the Queen of the North, but the meaning there
remains unclear. Is Jimmy going to take revenge on Uncle Josh? Or will he, like Adelaine, join in
the circle of vice? We have no clear answer but this could be the possible explanation for the
uncertainty that trauma will lead you to. You do not know when it comes, or when it goes. You
have no choice, but “[coming] out of the bushes and [standing] on the dock, watching the Queen
In short, Eden Robinson’s Queen of the North adopts a fragmented narrative to imitate
how trauma works on an individual’s memories, which reveals a power hierarchy between the
colonizer and the indigenous people as well as male and female through the protagonist
Adelaine’s intellect, morality and emotions. Due to the limited words, this essay only focused on
the traumatic experience of Adelaine but may overlook other issues like identity politics and the
impact of colonialism. Just let the trauma be the departure, let it be, and be a part of you.
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Works Cited
Hanson, Eric, et al. “The Residential School System.” Indigenous Foundations. First Nations and
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Lawrence, Alicia Marie. Shattered Hearts: Indigenous Women and Subaltern Resistance in
Robinson, Eden. “Queen of the North”. The Short Story (1001) (Dr. Benjamin BARBER)
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Spivak, Gayatri Chakravorty., and Rosalind C. Morris. Can the Subaltern Speak?: Reflections on