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2. Coherence and Cohesion: The essay is well-organized with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a
conclusion. The information is presented in a logical sequence, and the use of linking words and phrases, such
as "overall," "while," "meanwhile," and "in contrast," helps to establish coherence and cohesion.
3. Lexical Resources: The vocabulary used is varied and appropriate for the task. There is evidence of a wide
range of vocabulary, including specific terms related to the topic, such as "expenditure," "fixed-line services," and
"fluctuation." Additionally, the essay demonstrates effective use of synonyms and paraphrasing.
4. Grammatical range & accuracy: The essay showcases a good command of grammatical structures, with
accurate and varied use of tenses, including the past and present simple, past perfect, and present perfect. The
sentences are well-structured and there are no major grammatical errors that impede understanding.
• The number of male students studying Philosophy
at the University of Cambridge in 2001 stood at
around 50.
• Male students studying Philosophy at the
University of Cambridge in 2001 numbered
around 50.
• The number of male students studying Philosophy
at the University of Cambridge in 2001 totaled
around 50.
• In total, 50 male students studied Philosophy at
the University of Cambridge in 2001.
• The number of male students studying Philosophy
The chart shows the proportion of male and at the University of Cambridge in 2001 amounted
female students studying six art-related subjects to around 50.
at the university of Cambridge in 2011. • The figure for male students studying Philosophy
at the University of Cambridge in 2001 amounted
to/totaled around 50.
Simple comparisons
A higher/bigger/lower/smaller + number/proportion/percentage of
Figure A do than Figure B
Figure A is the lowest at (Data A), whereas/while Figure B is the highest at (Data B)
The bar chart compares the sales of 5 different • Snickers sold more chocolate bars by a
chocolate bars in 2002. Let’s compare Mars and ratio of two to one.
Snickers.
• The number of chocolate bars Snickers
sold outnumbered the total number Mars
sold by a ratio of two to one.
VOCAB SUMMARY FOR
01 INCREASE IN VALUE
increase
rise
WRITING TRENDS
grow
surge
soar
skyrocket
02 DECREASE IN VALUE
decrease
decline
03
leap fall
drop OTHER SITUATIONS
reduce Value remains the same: hover, remain
dip stable, stay constant, stay steady
plunge Value changes frequently: fluctuate,
plummet vary, swing
Value stops rising and remains the
same: plateau, level off, flatten out
Value reaches its highest point: peak
01 INCREASE IN VALUE
increase
rise
grow
surge
soar
skyrocket
leap
peak
After May, the figure for the 11 pm news peaked/leaped at 4.1 million in August.
There was a decrease/decline/drop/fall/reduction/dip in CO2 emissions per person in Norway from just
over 10 tonnes to around 7 tonnes between 1985 to 1995.
02 DECREASE IN VALUE
decrease
decline
fall
drop
reduce
dip
plunge
plummet
In winter, the demand for electricity in England plummets/plunges/takes a plunge after 10 pm,
reaching/hitting a low point between the morning hours of 6 and 7 o'clock.
2.5 DEGREE OF MOVEMENT
Big changes:
sharp(ly), dramatic(ally), rapid(ly),
abrupt(ly), significant(ly),
precipitous(ly)
Small changes:
steady(ily), slight(ly), gradual(ly),
marginal(ly), gentle(y)
The figure for the 1 pm News remained fairly stable, hovering at around 1.3 million throughout the year.
The figure for the 6 pm News showed some fluctuation/fluctuated widely throughout the year but the
general trend was downwards, and it ended the year at around 3.4 million.
03 OTHER SITUATIONS
Value remains the same:
hover, remain stable, stay
constant, stay steady
Value changes frequently:
fluctuate, vary, swing
Value stops rising and
remains the same:
plateau, level off, flatten out
Value reaches its highest
point: peak
The number of people who visited the British Museum varied throughout the summer, reaching its peak in
the middle of July and hitting a low in the middle of August.
03 OTHER SITUATIONS
Value remains the same:
hover, remain stable, stay
constant, stay steady
Value changes frequently:
fluctuate, vary, swing
Value stops rising and
remains the same:
plateau, level off, flatten out
Value reaches its highest
point: peak
The number of homeless people in London remained steady between 2010 and 2013.
This was followed by a marginal increase from 500 to 1000 before 2015. From 2015 onward, the figure for
the homeless population in London plateaued/leveled off/flattened out.
A PERCENT
A percent is a hundredth part of something. The word percent is
always preceded by a number. For example:
•The population figures for India rose by 12 percent over the two
decades.
•The figure for unemployment dropped to 5 percent in 2015.
PERCENTAGE
The word percentage means a part of a whole.
•The percentage of advertising online was 43% in 2012.
•The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female teachers
in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.
You can use adjectives to describe the size of the percentage
(large/small)
OTHER WAYS TO DESCRIBE PERCENTAGE
• account for
• make up
• constitute
• comprise
PORTFOLIO OF 2022
WHAT VERBS TO USE
• 6% of energy production in France in 2010 was hydro power.
• 24% of energy production in France in 2010 wa s nuclear power.
2. The proportion of people stating that they cycled to work to reduce pollution stood at 30%.
= The proportion of people stating that they cycled to work to reduce pollution stood at just under a third.
3. 11% of people said that driving to work was safer than cycling.
= Slightly more than one in ten people said that driving to work was safer than cycling.
4. 15% of people stated that they cycled to work because they did not have to worry about
parking.
= Less than a fifth of people stated that they cycled to work because they did not have to worry about parking.
5. Subway ridership dropped by 50% between 1999 and 2004.
= Subway ridership was halved between 1999 and 2004.
PRACTICE 1
1. According to the pie chart __________ of imports came from
India in 2012. (75%)
2. Oil accounted for __________ of electricity production. (80%)
3. Production of TVs __________ in the period between 2012 and
2014. (dropped by 50%)
4. Mobile calls showed a gradual rise of __________ from 2000 to
2001. (23%)
PRACTICE 2
The path chart illustrates __________ electricity generated by five
different forms of fuel in the United Kingdom in 2014 and 2018.