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Engl 1302 - rg3 - Reflection Essay 1
Engl 1302 - rg3 - Reflection Essay 1
ENGL 1302-231
16 April 2024
Upon completing this final research genre, I discovered how scholars outline their
contextualizes my topic and covers subclaims I will address later on. However, Dr. Nelson also
introduced the rhetorical benefit of mentioning a research question and acknowledging what is
debated or unknown in literature (“Introduction” Class Lecture). After this lesson, I could finally
identify the various components of refereed articles’ introductions. Additionally, I learned how to
develop an effective thesis statement for a position paper. A thesis statement should include an
“assertion” and “reason” connected by a conjunction (Nelson, “Thesis” Class Lecture). The two
primary requirements of a thesis statement is that the claim and justification must have relatively
strong rebuttals from the opposing side, and these components must be “complete
sentences…with the same grammatical subject” (Nelson, “Thesis” Class Lecture). I can apply
Philosophy, and Culture course and upper level courses for my major. If I am struggling to create
Prior to this researched position paper, I thought that the best way to argue a claim was to
simply cite evidence; however, I slowly learned that explaining evidence is an essential
rhetorical choice that trumps letting the evidence ‘speak for itself.’ While my high school
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teachers emphasized the importance of forming a claim and selecting the most relevant evidence
as support, there were often gaps in my reasoning; this is evident, for I missed this rhetorical
opportunity in my first draft. For example, I simply wrote how scholars agreed on the “consistent
relevance of this statement (Ramon-Lozano, First Draft). To target this weakness, I identified
structure of the “Researched Position Outline Worksheet” (Nelson). If I found that no portion of
explain how universities can build students’ social health, I added a sentence that describes how
scholars’ findings are correlated. For instance, I demonstrated how a model used by Squires, et
al. describes “Yang, et al.’s inverse relationship between social health” and phone dependence in
my final draft (1294; Ramon-Lozano). Furthermore, this genre helped me exercise my logic and
critical thinking skills. The skills that I applied to form an argument for this paper will aid my
research in the future for my upper-level biology lab courses. If I am asked to develop an
experimental design and write an experiment outline, I will need to use both language and logic
to make connections between existing literature and demonstrate the validity of my alternative
hypothesis.
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subclaims using logic (Instructor comment). For instance, my first draft explained how high
psychological distress levels promoted phone dependence in college students without describing
the common stressors students experience (Ramon-Lozano, First Draft; Nelson, Instructor
comment). Thus, I described how the combination of academics and “family and work
correction explicitly related the evidence to my topic sentence. Additionally, after discussing my
struggle to make my paper more argumentative, Dr. Nelson suggested that I format my thesis
statement as a proposal. Accepting this suggestion ensured that my paper had a clear thesis
statement. My first thesis statement stated that “college students should become more aware of
their smartphone use,” which was a weak claim relative to my thorough research (First Draft,
provide support for college students by “promot[ing] healthier coping mechanisms than
During peer review, Ciara stated that I “might be missing a citation” in my introduction’s
literature summary (Villarreal). To correct this error, I added in-text citations with the names of
the scholars that concluded that poor social and psychological health is correlated with
al., Yang, et al.,” and “Mohamed, et al.” in an in-text citation, the scholars receive
genre required that I express my stance on scholarly literature. As previously discussed, my first
draft lacked argumentative statements; instead of elaborating on how scholars’ studies logically
relate to the real world, I simply paraphrased scholars’ findings. I improved my evaluation of
evidence by consulting with Dr. Nelson and brainstorming evaluations of evidence during office
hours. Alternatively, the least challenging aspect of my paper was locating and paraphrasing the
results of current literature. I have spent a semester annotating and re-reading my sources, so I
had a strong research base for my argumentative paper. I could quickly locate concise summaries
of my refereed articles and color-coded highlighted sections that represent a particular sub-topic.
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Works Cited
Nelson, Sharity. “ENGL 1302 Researched Position Outline Worksheet.” 27 March 2024. ENGL
Nelson, Sharity. “ENGL 1302 - RG3 - Researched Position Paper - First Draft” by Kiara
instructor comment.
Nelson, Sharity. Thesis Statement Formula Class Lecture. 20 March 2024. ENGL 1302-231,
Nelson, Sharity. Introduction Formula Class Lecture. 24 March 2024. ENGL 1302-231, Texas
Ramon-Lozano, Kiara. “ENGL 1302 Researched Position Worksheet.” 27 March 2024. ENGL
Ramon-Lozano, Kiara. “ENGL 1302 - RG2 - Literature Review - First Draft.” 3 April 2024.
Relationship with Wellness.” First Draft. 3 April 2024. ENGL 1302, Texas A&M
International University.
Squires, Lauren R., et al. “Psychological Distress, Emotion Dysregulation, and Coping
Journal of Mental Health and Addiction, vol. 19, no. 4, 2021, pp. 1284-1299. Academic
Villarreal, Ciara. “ENGL 1302 - RG3 - Researched Position Paper - Modified Draft” by Kiara
Ramon-Lozano. 10 April 2024. ENGL 1302, Texas A&M International University, peer
comment.