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Research Position Essay 1
Research Position Essay 1
Lorenzo Luna
ENGL 1302-231
12 April 2024
Every year, millions of people attend and watch sporting events to watch their favorite
athletes put their body on the line for entertainment. Oftentimes, society views these athletics as
just machines or simply vessels to fuel their need for entertainment. However, these athletes risk
the possibility of injury which further impacts their “civilian life” outside of sports. One of the
most concerning injuries in athletes are SRC or sports related concussions. In recent years,
numerous studies have been done to further realize the consequences of SRC and as well as
preventive measures needed to be put in place to lessen the chance of obtaining this injury.
Studies ranging from SRC suffered in the youth, lingering effects after obtaining SRC, as well as
the risks that come with getting re-diagnosed with SRC. These athletes for the most part partake
in sports at a young age and this brings up the question whether or not it is worth enrolling a kid
into sports at such a young age with the possible risk of obtaining a SRC. This paper argues that
an athlete is significantly more likely to obtain SRC at a younger age and re-risk at diagnosis
Athletes all begin somewhere and most begin playing sports in their youth which adds a
kickstart to the possibility of them being diagnosed with SRC. More laws were also put into
place in order to improve the screening process in regards to SRC due to hopefully reducing the
risk of kids playing contact sports with an undiagnosed concussion. Beilder, et al. makes a
statement using a graph showing the statistics of states that quickly adopted some sort of law in
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order to combat SRC (7). Washington was the first to lead closely followed by other east coast
states and soon followed more of the country (8). Contact sports are the leading type of sport
leading to SRC also claimed by Beilder, et al. (9). In agreement with Beiler et, al., Musko,
Patryk, and Andreas K. Demetriades both agree that contact sports are the highest “type” of sport
in regards to diagnosis in SRC mainly in the youth. Beilder et.al, also claims that advancements
at the school levels in technology are improving, but is ultimately not where it needs to be in
regards to public schools as opposed to private schools (9). Most professional athletes have come
from a public setting as opposed to a private setting which in return can lead them for a chance
of re-injury as the number of kids enrolled in public schools is much higher than private schools
(10). A much smaller sample size is easier to keep track of SRC cases as more trainers and
equipment is readily available compared to a public school where they can be triple the size of a
private school. A child can easily play with an undiagnosed case of SRC and not know until it’s
There has always been a division in the sports world regarding differences in gender and
with this comes variability in SRC rates compared to men and women. Musko, Patryk, and
Andreas K. Demetriades also chime in and state that the risk of concussions is significantly
higher in men than women (132). This is due in large part to men participating in contact sports
such as football, soccer, basketball, etc. compared to women who don’t often take part in contact
sports (133). Musko, Patryk, and Andreas K. Demetriades further conquered football as
ultimately the sport leading the pact in SRC diagnosis due to the high impact hits sustained in the
sport (133). This has been re-iterated and is relatively well known, but often athletes in the NFL
come out and say that tackles sustained are often worse than car crashes. Women don’t have to
face the same fear of being hit by a 300 pound athlete as women don’t participate in football,
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however there are some rare exceptions, but it does not affect the overall study as a whole due to
the small percentage of women who participate. This study done by Musko, Patryk, and Andreas
K. Demetriades also mainly focused on Division 1 athletes who are the next step above
adolescents, but before professional which covers another range of athletes. While they might
not be at the “professional level” this just adds to the argument that parents should not be
enrolling their kids in sports at such a young age because there are multiple “levels” to be getting
Like any other injury, some sort of recovery is required in order to be brought back to full
health. The diagnosis of a concussion is rather unique as it’s not a physical bone that can be
repaired with a cast or medicine. This directly affects the brain and the way it affects your
decision making abilities according to Bunt, et al. Bunt, et. al also makes the claim that It is of
utmost importance to clear the protocols in place because if an athlete were to return to their
contact sport it can possibly risk them either further complicating the injury or worst case
scenario could be deadly (377). Bretzin et. al also agrees with the recovery time period, but
mainly covers the collegiate side of the game. Bretzin et al. reiterates that the gender differences
makes it a case by case basis in regards to recovery by providing a graph of recovery times.
Kelly et al. and Henke both concluded each of their indivail studies regarding small recovery
times and low aerobic exercises. This small repetition of exercises soothed the brain’s rhythm,
and ultimately helped shorten the recovery time by a couple of days compared to the actual
national average (378). The human body can only do so much in a short amount of time, so
having these aerobic exercises is a small step in the right direction to hopefully be cleared for the
return to action. A question can be brought up whether or not the effectiveness of these exercises
can be used multiple times or how much more can the body withstand this type injury unitl it
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completely “checks out”. Parents should view these studies as a wakeup call to hopefully see that
the human body is a complex vessel and it can be outright dangerous to have their kids
participating in these high impact sports especially when the child's brain isn’t even fully
developed yet.
In essence, though there has been more of an emphasis on cracking down on SRC
diagnosis, it still remains an emerging issue within the sports world. While this has always been
an underlying issue, it has not been taken as seriously as it has now as technology continues to
advance. The involvement of the youth in high contact sports such as football, basketball, soccer
etc. is not helping the overall cause as determined by scholars. Parents now have to make the
decision on whether or not it's worth the risk of enrolling their kids into the sports. Their
“civilian life” can be negatively affected outside of their sport which can be further more
impacting down the line in the instance they were to suffer another concussion. Now the parents
with all the data and research out there have to make the decision to either risk their child’s
health or to maybe delay their enrollment a few years when their brain is more developed. These
choices will help decide where the next generation of athletes ultimately land and whether or not
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