Email first lines (Icebreaker):

My Prices
First lines: $0.6/each
Subject lines: $0.5/each
Delivery time
I don't have a fixed delivery time, you should contact me if what you need
isn't included in the packages. However, you can expect I can write
20-50first lines/per day. You can do the math ;)

So, you're sending cold emails to your leads?

An email with personalized first lines and subject lines not only catches
the readers' attention but also increases the open rates and click rates.
Thus, I'm here to offer writing email first lines and subject lines (You can
buy those 2 services separately)

Let's be honest here... this is a boring task to do. But that's okay because
I'm here to help you save your time and effort.

Here's a glimpse of what you'll get:

Personalized compliments for your list to increase open rates
English native speaker writing style (even though I'm not a native speaker
:o)
In my working process, I'll point out which lead is a bad lead and highlight
it. You can consider deleting that person.

Anyway, message me if you have any questions. Can't wait to send my

work to your email list~

Let's make money!

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1h-3h: sale page
3h-5h: học #3
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Sự đồng cảm với khó khăn của khách hàng...

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NỘI DUNG SƠ LƯỢC - HOW IT WORKS…
This first line is essential for setting the tone of the email. It also
helps you to catch your recipient's attention.
The beginning of an email message can affect the recipient's first
impression and determine how they respond. The opening sentence
can prove a powerful tool to present valuable information and reflect
the purpose of the message.

THE ___________ (PRODUCT/SERVICE)

Đây là toàn bộ những gì bạn sẽ nhận được (Big Idea)...

Đây là cách nó hoạt động & tại sao nó lại hiệu quả (Unique
Mechanism)...

Đây là tương lai của bạn nếu bạn sử dụng sản phẩm này...

Here’s What’s Included In It (benefits)

● An excellent email first line can have several tangible benefits in
various scenarios. Here are some reality-based benefits that can
result from a well-crafted email opening:
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● Increased Open Rates: A captivating first line can significantly
improve your email open rates. When recipients see an intriguing or
compelling opening, they are more likely to click and open the
 email, leading to better engagement and higher chances of achieving
your communication goals.
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● Improved Response Rates: An attention-grabbing first line can pique
the recipient's curiosity or generate interest, resulting in higher
response rates. When your email stands out from the crowd and
prompts the recipient to take action, you increase the likelihood of
receiving a timely and meaningful response.
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● Enhanced Professional Reputation: A well-written first line
demonstrates your communication skills and professionalism. By
crafting a concise and impactful opening, you present yourself as
someone who values attention to detail, clear communication, and
effective relationship-building. This can enhance your professional
reputation and leave a positive impression on the recipient.
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● Time-Saving Efficiency: In busy work environments, individuals
receive a high volume of emails daily. A strong first line that clearly
conveys the purpose or request of the email can save time for both
parties. By providing a clear context or summarizing the email's
content, you make it easier for the recipient to prioritize and respond
promptly, leading to increased efficiency in communication.
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● Increased Collaboration and Partnerships: A well-crafted first line
can help initiate collaborations and partnerships. By presenting a
compelling proposal, highlighting potential benefits, or outlining
shared interests, you can capture the recipient's attention and
motivate them to explore working together. This can open doors to
valuable professional relationships and opportunities.
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● Positive Brand Perception: Whether you're representing yourself or
an organization, an excellent first line can contribute to a positive
brand perception. It shows that you value effective communication
and take the time to craft thoughtful and engaging messages. This
attention to detail can enhance the recipient's perception of your
 personal or brand image and contribute to building trust and
credibility.
● Crafting an engaging email opener leads to higher open rates and
improves your chances of being read and heard
● Efficiency is maximized as clear and concise openings allow
recipients to prioritize and respond promptly, saving valuable time
for all parties involved
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Đây là những gì người khác nói về nó (Proof & Testimonial) ______

Tiết lộ giá
Guarantee

Actually, I'm not very experienced in this field either. I have only
recently discovered the concept of email first lines and started
practicing writing them. However, with my experience in writing
sales pages and some knowledge in email copywriting, I believe I
can give it a try. I will do my best to meet your requirements, and I
assure you that if you are not satisfied with my work, there will be
no need to pay me.

Thêm vào quà tặng (nếu có)...

Tại sao phải hành động ngay bây giờ?
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● Limit
● Say “No”
FAQ
Icebreaker ( email first line)

I think you know “The Potential of an Irresistible Email Opener”/ “

Unleash the Power of a Captivating Email First Line”

Discover the hidden benefits of crafting an opener that demands

attention and fuels curiosity. Watch as open rates soar, captivating
your recipients from the very first line. Witness the power of
triggering immediate actions, prompting timely responses, and
driving desired outcomes. Moreover, experience the magic of
forging genuine connections that foster long-lasting relationships
and unlock exciting opportunities.

Let’s be honest... this is a tedious task, right, And I really know this.
But don't worry, I am here to help you save yourself from losing a
lot of time and effort.

Here are the perks that you’ll get if you give me this task.
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Actually, I'm not very experienced in this field either. I have only
recently discovered the concept of email first lines and started
practicing writing them.

However, with my experience in writing sales pages and some

knowledge of email copywriting, I believe I can give it a try.
I will do my best to meet your requirements,

My price.
- First Lines: $0.6 each
- Subject Lines: $0.5 each

I think this price is suitable for my time and effort

Delivery time.

My guarantee is that
If you don't think it’s worth at least a hundred times what you
invested, or you are not satisfied with my task, there will be no need
to pay or your uncashed check and money order will be put in your
retain mail.
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Introducing My Pricing:
- First Lines: $0.6 each
- Subject Lines: $0.5 each

Delivery Time:
I don't have a fixed delivery time, but if you have specific
requirements that are not covered by the packages, feel free to reach
out to me. However, on average, I can write 20-50 first lines per day.
You can do the math and estimate the timeframe accordingly ;)

So, are you currently sending cold emails to your leads?

Crafting personalized first lines and subject lines for your emails not
only grabs the attention of your readers but also boosts open rates
and click-through rates. That's where I come in, offering my services
to write compelling email openings and subject lines. (Please note
that you can purchase these services separately.)

Let's be honest, this task can be quite tedious. But don't worry, I'm
here to save you time and effort.

Here's a sneak peek of what you'll get:

- Personalized compliments for your email list to increase open rates
- Native English speaker writing style (despite not being a native
speaker myself :o)
- During the process, I'll identify any leads that may not be ideal and
suggest removing them from your list.

If you have any questions or need further clarification, feel free to

message me. I can't wait to deliver my work to your email list!

Let's make money together!