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Tugas Tutorial Online 2 Bahasa Inggris

The document is an online tutorial assignment for an English course by Dani Muhammad Yusuf, a student at Universitas Terbuka. It includes an analysis of a recommendation letter, identifying errors and suggesting corrections to improve clarity and professionalism. Additionally, it contains a thank-you letter to a guest speaker for an upcoming seminar, expressing gratitude and anticipation for their participation.

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Tugas Tutorial Online 2 Bahasa Inggris

The document is an online tutorial assignment for an English course by Dani Muhammad Yusuf, a student at Universitas Terbuka. It includes an analysis of a recommendation letter, identifying errors and suggesting corrections to improve clarity and professionalism. Additionally, it contains a thank-you letter to a guest speaker for an upcoming seminar, expressing gratitude and anticipation for their participation.

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TUGAS TUTORIAL ONLINE 2

MATA KULIAH :

BAHASA INGGRIS

OLEH :

NAMA : DANI MUHAMMAD YUSUF

NIM : 050720576

UPBJJ : SAMARINDA

PROGRAM STUDI ILMU HUKUM

FAKULTAS HUKUM, ILMU SOSIAL, DAN ILMU POLITIK

UNIVERSITAS TERBUKA

2024
Jawab :
1. The parts of the letter numbered 1-3 are as follows:
1) Dear Vincent Prasad: This is the salutation, addressing the
recipient of the letter, Vincent Prasad.
2) It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr.
Data Analyst role with Clouddatanow Tech...: This section serves
as the introduction and main body of the letter, where Rachel
Gomez introduces herself, shares her professional background, and
provides a recommendation for Ashley Singer.
3) Sincerely, Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager: This is the closing
of the letter, including the writer's name and title, signifying the
end of the correspondence.
2. The letter from Pamela Taylor contains several errors that can be identified
as follows:
 Spelling Error: The word "delay" in the phrase "the delivery was
significantly delay" should be corrected to "delayed" to maintain
proper verb tense and form.
 Punctuation Error: The word "additionally" should start with a
capital "A" as it begins a new sentence. The correct form is
"Additionally, I would appreciate an explanation..."
 Clarity and Consistency: The phrase "damaged items or a
replacement of the affecting vegetables" is awkwardly phrased. It
would be clearer to say, "damaged items or a replacement for the
affected vegetables."
 Missing Comma: In the sentence "Please contact me at your
earliest convenience to resolve this matter," a comma should
follow "convenience" for better readability: "Please contact me at
your earliest convenience, to resolve this matter."
 Formal Tone: The salutation "Dear Sir/Madam," could be
improved by addressing a specific person or department if known,
which would enhance the professionalism of the letter.
These corrections would improve the clarity, professionalism, and
grammatical accuracy of the letter.

3. Subject: Thank You for Your Participation

Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

I hope this message finds you well. On behalf of the organizing


committee, I would like to extend our heartfelt gratitude for your
willingness to be a guest speaker at our upcoming international seminar.
Your expertise and insights will undoubtedly enrich our discussions and
provide invaluable knowledge to all attendees.

We are excited about the opportunity to hear your thoughts on the latest
developments in your field. Your participation is crucial to the success of

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this event, and we appreciate the time and effort you are dedicating to
share your experiences with us.

Thank you once again for accepting our invitation. We look forward to
welcoming you at the seminar.

Best regards,

Dani Muhammad Yusuf


Chairman, International Seminar Committee

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