TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Pertanyaan / Questions

Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

Answer

The parts of the letter marked by numbers 1-3 are:

Number 1: Salutation and Name of mail recipient

Number 2: The body of the letter containing a recommendation for Ashley Singer for
the Jr. Data Analyst role at Cloud data now Tech. This includes an introduction,
recommendation, and a description of Ashley Singer's qualities and skills.
Number 3: closing salutation ,The signature and position of Rachel Gomez as Sr.
Project Manager at the bottom of the letter.

2. Pertanyaan / Questions

Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)

Answer

The letter above contains several errors:

1) The use of 'u' instead of the correct spelling 'you' in the sentence "Thank u for
your letter of 4 July..." should be written as "Thank you for your letter of 4
July..."
2) Grammar and spelling errors in the sentence "We hope you will find our prices
n terms satisfactory." It should be corrected to "We hope you will find our prices
and terms satisfactory.
3) The date format should follow the correct format, which is "July 21, 2021,"
instead of "July 21, 2021."
 4) There is an error in the word "receive" in the sentence "I look forward to receive
your order." It should be "I look forward to receiving your order."
5) At the end of the letter, the signature of the Sales Manager should be placed
below the name "Robert Brown," and there is no need to write "Robert Brown"
twice. It should be:
Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Sales Manager

3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen
Smith. Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia
menjadi narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-
150 kata.

Answer

Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

I trust this email finds you well. On behalf of the organizing committee, I extend our
heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable contribution as a guest speaker at our recent
international seminar. Your expertise and insights significantly enriched the discussions,
providing our participants with a deeper understanding of sustainable energy solutions.

Your engaging presentation on "Innovations in Sustainable Energy Technologies"

captivated the audience, and the positive feedback we received is a testament to the
impact of your knowledge and experience. Your willingness to share your expertise
played a pivotal role in the success of our event.

We truly appreciate your commitment to advancing knowledge in the field of

sustainable energy and your support in fostering intellectual exchange. Your presence
contributed to making our seminar a memorable and enriching experience for all
involved.

Once again, thank you for your time, dedication, and inspiring contribution. We hope
to have the privilege of welcoming you to our future events.

Best regards,

Jaden Kim

Chairman, Mornong Show Organizing Committee

Kimjaden@gmail.com