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BUKU JAWABAN TUGAS

TUGAS 2

Nama Mahasiswa : JULIO REYNALDI EKA PRATAMA

Nomor Induk Mahasiswa/ NIM : 042269688

Kode/Nama Mata Kuliah : MKWI4201

Kode/Nama UPBJJ : 77/UPBJJ UT DENPASAR

KEMENTERIAN PENDIDIKAN DAN KEBUDAYAAN

UNIVERSITAS TERBUKA
1. Sure, here are the parts of the letter numbered 1-3:

• Number 1 indicates the contact information of the letter's recipient, Vincent


Prasad, including the name, phone number, email address, and physical
address.
• Number 2 is the body of the letter or the message that contains Rachel
Gomez's recommendation for Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst
position at Clouddatanow Tech. This is the main part of the letter that
provides the recommendation and the reasons why Ashley is considered
suitable for the job.
• Number 3 represents the signature of the letter's author, Rachel Gomez, who
includes her job title as "Sr. Project Manager" beneath her signature. This is
the closing of the letter that identifies the author.

2. Here are five errors in the letter:

• "Thank u" should be "Thank you" for a more formal and professional tone.
• "4 july" should be "4th of July" to indicate a specific date properly.
• "n" should be "and" in the sentence "We hope you will find our prices n
terms satisfactory" for correct grammar and clarity.
• "receive" should be "receiving" to use the correct form of the verb in the
sentence "I look forward to receive your order."
• "Sales Manage" should be "Sales Manager" for the correct job title and
spelling.
Corrected version:

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court

Kennett, MO 63857

July 21, 2021

William Reed

Purchase Manager

The Cooking Store

2175 Rivendell Drive

Mineral City, OH 44656

Dear Mr. Reed,

Thank you for your letter of July 4th inquiring about our latest catalog, price list,
and terms of payment.

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment
together with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices
and terms satisfactory.

I look forward to receiving your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Sales Manager

These corrections make the letter more professional and grammatically accurate.
3. Subject: Heartfelt Thanks for Your Contribution to Our International
Seminar

Dear Professor Allen Smith,

I hope this email finds you well. On behalf of the organizing committee of the
International Seminar on “Understanding mathematical concepts”, I would like to
express our sincerest gratitude for your outstanding contribution as a guest speaker.

Your in-depth presentation on “Understanding mathematical concepts helps


individuals make informed decisions, whether it's calculating discounts during
shopping or managing personal investments” left a lasting impact on our
participants, and your insights were truly invaluable. Your ability to simplify
complex concepts and engage the audience is commendable.

We appreciate the time and effort you dedicated to our seminar, as your presence
significantly enriched the discussions and elevated the overall quality of the event.
Your expertise has inspired all of us.

Once again, thank you for your remarkable contribution to the success of our
seminar. We hope to have the privilege of hosting you again in the future.

Warm regards,

Julio Reynaldi

Chairman, Organizing Committee

International Seminar on “Understanding mathematical concepts”

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