TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |rdutta@email.com | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | vincent.prasad@email.com | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we
first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams.
Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but
also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely
confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the
skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become
an asset and help your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)

Answer :
The letter provided in the question is a recommendation letter written by Rachel Gomez,
a Sr. Project Manager, for Ashley Singer, a Jr. Data Analyst, who is being recommended
for a positionat Clouddatanow Tech. The letter is divided into three parts, which are:
1. Introduction or opening paragraph: In this paragraph, Rachel Gomez introduces
herself and explains that she is writing to recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data
Analyst role with Clouddatanow Tech. She also provides some background information
about her own experience in the tech industry and her experience working with Ashley.
2. Body of the letter: In this section, Rachel Gomez provides more details about Ashley's
skills and qualities that make her a strong candidate for the Jr. Data Analyst role. She
highlights Ashley's technical skills, positive attitude, communication skills, focus, and
attention to detail. She also expresses her confidence that Ashley would be a great fit for
Clouddatanow Tech.
3. Closing paragraph: In this paragraph, Rachel Gomez concludes the letter by offering
to provide more information or specific examples if needed. She signs off with her name
and job title.
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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms
of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)

Answer :
1. The use of informal language, such as "thank u" instead of "thank you."
2. The salutation "Dear Mr. Reed," is not properly formatted and should be "Dear
William Reed,"or "Dear Mr. William Reed."
3. The sentence "I look forward to receive your order" should be corrected to "I look
forward to receiving your order."
4. The sender's name is repeated twice at the end of the letter.
5. The date format is incorrect and should be "July 21, 2021" instead of "21 July 2021."
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.

Answer :
Dear seller,
I ordered Three cans of cookies from your online Store on November 28 and paid them at
the same day.

This was not the first time I bought cookies from Online Store, but it was the first time
from your Store. I learned that your Store is quite well-known and has a high rating.

But when the cookies finally arrived this morning, I was very disappointed to see that they
are actually have been expired. The expiry date is clearly printed on each lid of the cans:
Desember-2023

I don't understand how a reputable shop like yours could send expired products. I don't
think you did it intentionally, but I am quite disappointed about this carelessness.

I want a replacement of these cookies immediately. If you cannot send me the

replacements please arrange refund of the money I have paid, immediately.

I hope I will receive your reply as soon as possible.

Regards,
Rizky Maulina