MY THRILLER IDEA

tueur de serpents

killer of snakes

I chose this title because a person I know similar to the main character, he calls people who go behind his back snakes so I thought killer of snakes would be a good title. The reason I put it in French is because I think it sounds more aesthetically pleasing.
about a young boy who gets sent down for something he didnt do, so he joins a prison gang in order to keep himself on top until he can find a way out , and get revenge on the friend who put him in there. Facing becoming the most wanted man in Britain, being looked for by helicopter, cars, boats and on foot. He will stop at nothing to get his revenge and prove his innocence.

script
Starts with my main character in a orange jumpsuit being led down a prison corridor in slow motion by a prison guard with no sound at all. Being played over with nondiegetic narration by the same character. how did I get here? I guess youre all wondering! Then it goes to a clip of him being given a bag by a friend to look after. No words again just the voice over! A friend gave me a bag to look after stupidly I said yes , ten minutes later I got all these cops on my ass! able to hear the diegetic car sirens so I start running clip of him running then it goes back to him being walked down this prison corridor I guess I didnt run fast enough aye? then to a clip of him on the floor being pinned down by a police man, close up of his face and him shouting but no diegetic sound. Then a flashback to him being walked down this corridor , then a clip of him being put in a police car close up of his face again. so I think can guess what happened next then a flash of him being put in the cell. A mid shot of him though the bars. Then an over shot of him laying down on his bed and thats how I ended up here, but not for long I got an old friend to see then a close up on an evil smile.

Costume
For the main character we only see in this opening, him wearing a casual outfit as well as his friend who gives him the bag. Then a prison jumpsuit.

The police man and the prison guard wear similar things.

setting

The place this clip is set is in the street in a poor area. With built up council flats and an obvious sense of Britains poverty. in the prison corridor, this can just be a bland corridor maybe passing a few prisoners and empty cells. his cell will be a small basic room just like an English cell.

props
The bag Running shoes Hand cuffs bandana, to cover his face Cigarette Lighter