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Introduction (talk about what is G.W)

What is global warming?

Global warming happens when the earth
temperature increase.

What cause global warming and what are the
effects?

How to stop global warming?

Theme : Current Issues
Body Paragraph (1)

In the world of globalization, cars become
more sophisticated and more factories being
build up. All of them bring severe damage to
our earth.

Research found that there are 2 main factors
that cause global warming: natural factors,
human factors.

Natural factors : solar output, greenhouse
effect.
Body Paragraph (2)

Greenhouse effect happens because the
presence of greenhouse gases.

Greenhouse gases: carbon dioxide, nitrous
oxide, methane and water vapour.

Aerosols are the fine particles and droplets
that reflect and absorb incoming solar
radiation.

The absorb of heat cause global warming.
Body Paragraph (3)

Human factors can be divided into few
types: open burning, fumes from vehicles,
CFCs and deforestation.

Open burning produces carbon dioxide,
fumes from vehicles produce carbon
monoxide while factories release sulphur
dioxide.

Deforestation destroy natural habitat.
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Global warming rings a lot of effects to our
environment.

Ice berg at poles melt and sea level rises.

The increase of temperature cause the yield
of the crops decrease due to dry and infertile
soil.

Animals that could not adapt the sudden
change of climates died. E.g.: mammoth.
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Ways to reduce global warming

Car pooling
Stop open burning
Replanting
Develop more energy such as wind energy,
geothermal energy.

Conclusion

Global warming is a severe current issue nowadays.
Action should be taken in order to reduce the effect
of global warming to our Earth.

Back
What do you know about global warming? Global warming is
when the earth temperature rises up. It happens when the
greenhouse gas trap the heat from the surrounding. What cause
global warming? How to stop global warming?

The factors of global warming can be classified into two, which is
natural factors and human factors. First, natural factors, the
changes in solar output which means the amount energy radiating
from the sun is not constant. The greenhouse effect also affect
world climate. The greenhouse effect happens because of
greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide, methane, nitrous oxide
and water vapour . When the heat from the sun enters the Earth,
some of them reflected back to the space and some of them is
absorbed by the greenhouse gases. This makes the temperature of
the earth to rise. Moreover, aerosols is the factor that affecting
climates too. Aerosols are fine particles and droplets that can linger
in the atmosphere for quite a long period.

These particles reflected and absorbed solar radiation. The
change of type and quantity of aerosols in the atmosphere
wall effects the amount of solar energy reflected/absorbed.

Next, human factors which affecting climate are the
enhance of greenhouse effect. Various of human activities
releases greenhouse gases, such as open burning, the using
of chlorofluorocarbon (CFCs) product like air conditioner and
pesticide. Besides, CFCs also cause the depletion of ozone
layer. Furthermore, deforestation also hidden cause of global
warming. Deforestation destroy flora and faunas habitat and
it also drives climate change. Trees help water cycle and
regulate earth temperature. As deforestation keep carry out,
the earth climate will change as there was no carbon dioxide
and oxygen cycle. Carbon dioxide absorbs heat and then the
earth temperature rise and cause global warming.
When global warming occurs, the natural food chain and
food web are affected. For instance, global warming cause
the ice berg at the poles to melt, the sea level rises. This
water then covers some small island, plants and animal soon
dead. Additionally, some of the animals cannot adapt to the
sudden change of climate and this make them die. Examples,
mammoth had extinct due to this factor. The rise of
temperature cause the decline in yield of crops due to dry
and infertile soil.

How to reduce global warming? First, reduce the burning of
fossil fuels. We can use lead-free petrol instead of fossil
fuel. Besides, we should reduce deforestation but practice
replanting. Moreover, non-renewable energy should be used
wisely, and develop other sources of energy such as solar e. ,
wind e. , and geothermal e. . We can car pooling or public
transport to reduce the emission of carbon monoxide.


Global warming is a severe current issue nowadays. Action
should be taken to control the situation. It is not about
individual problem, but related to the whole world, everyone
should responsible to the earth.
Back
The factors of global warming can be classified into two, which is natural factors and human
factors. First, natural factors, the changes in solar output which means the amount energy
radiating from the sun is not constant. The greenhouse effect also affect world climate. The
greenhouse effect happens because of greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide, methane,
nitrous oxide and water vapour . When the heat from the sun enters the Earth, some of them
reflected back to the space and some of them is absorbed by the greenhouse gases. This
makes the temperature of the earth to rise. // Moreover, aerosols is the factor that affecting
climates too. Aerosols are fine particles and droplets that can linger in the atmosphere for quite
a long period. These particles reflected and absorbed solar radiation. The change of type and
quantity of aerosols in the atmosphere wall effects the amount of solar energy
reflected/absorbed.


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The factors of global warming can be classified into two, which is natural
factors and human factors. First, natural factors, the changes in solar output
which means the amount energy radiating from the sun is not constant. The
greenhouse effect also affect world climate. It happens because of
greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide, methane, nitrous oxide and water
vapour . When the heat from the sun enters the Earth, some of them reflected
back to the space and some of them are absorbed by the greenhouse gases.
This cause the temperature of the earth to rise.

Moreover, aerosols is the factor that affecting climates too. Aerosols are fine
particles and droplets that can linger in the atmosphere for quite a long period.
These particles reflected and absorbed solar radiation. The change of type
and quantity of aerosols in the atmosphere wall effects the amount of solar
energy reflected/absorbed.


Next, human factors which affecting climate are the enhance of
greenhouse effect. Various of human activities releases greenhouse
gases, such as open burning, the using of chlorofluorocarbon (CFCs)
product like air conditioner and pesticide. Besides, CFCs also cause the
depletion of ozone layer. Furthermore, deforestation also hidden cause of
global warming. Deforestation destroy flora and faunas habitat and it also
drives climate change. Trees help water cycle and regulate earth
temperature. As deforestation keep carry out, the earth climate will change
as there was no carbon dioxide and oxygen cycle. Carbon dioxide absorbs
heat and then the earth temperature rise and cause global warming.

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Next, human factors which affecting climate are the enhance of
greenhouse effect. Various of human activities releases greenhouse
gases, such as open burning, the use of chlorofluorocarbon (CFCs)
product like air conditioner and pesticide. Besides, CFCs also cause the
depletion of ozone layer. Furthermore, deforestation also the hidden cause
of global warming. Deforestation destroy the habitat of flora and fauna and
it also drives climate change. Trees help water cycle and regulate earth
temperature. As deforestation keep carry out, the earth climate will change
as there was no carbon dioxide and oxygen cycle. Carbon dioxide absorbs
heat and then the earth temperature rise and cause global warming.
Back
The factors of global warming can be classified into two, which is natural factors
and human factors. First, natural factors, the changes in solar output which means
the amount energy radiating from the sun is not constant. The greenhouse effect
also affect world climate. It happens because of greenhouse gas oxide such as
carbon dioxide, methane, nitrous and water vapour . When the heat from the sun
enter the Earth, some of them reflected back to the space and some of them are
absorbed by the greenhouse gases. This cause the temperature of the earth to
rise.

Moreover, aerosols is the factor that affecting climates too. Aerosols are find
particles and droplets that can linger in the atmosphere for quite a long period.
These particles reflected and absorbed solar radiation. The change of type and
quantity of aerosols in the atmosphere wall effects the amount of solar energy
reflected/absorbed.


The factors of global warming can be classified into two, which is natural factors
and human factors. First, natural factors, the changes in solar output which means
the amount energy radiating from the sun is not constant. The greenhouse effects
also affect world climate. It happens because of greenhouse gases oxide such as
carbon dioxide, methane, nitrous and water vapour . When the heat from the sun
enters the Earth, some of them are reflected back to the space and some of them
are absorbed by the greenhouse gases. This causes the temperature of the earth
to rise.

Moreover, aerosols are the factor that affecting climates too. Aerosols are fine
particles and droplets that can linger in the atmosphere for quite a long period.
These particles reflected and absorbed solar radiation. The change of type and
quantity of aerosols in the atmosphere will affect the amount of solar energy
reflected/absorbed.

Next, human factors which affecting climate are the enhance of greenhouse
effect. Various of human activities releases greenhouse gases, such as open
burning, the use of chloroflorocarbon (CFCs) product like air conditioner and
pesticide. Besides, CFCs also cause the depletion of ozone layer. Furthermore,
deforestation also the hidden cause of global warming. Deforestation destroy
the habitat of flora and fauna and it also drives climate change. Trees help
water cycle and regulate earth temperature. As deforestation keep carry out,
the earth climate will change as there was no carbon dioxide and oxygen cycle.
Carbon dioxide absorbs heat and then the earth temperature rise and cause
global warming.
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(Chlorofluorocarbon)
Next, human factors which affecting climate are the enhance of greenhouse
effect. Various of human activities releases greenhouse gases, such as open
burning, the use of Chlorofluorocarbon (CFCs) product like air conditioner and
pesticide. Besides, CFCs also cause the depletion of ozone layer. Furthermore,
deforestation also the hidden cause of global warming. Deforestation destroy
the habitat of flora and fauna and it also drives climate change. Trees help
water cycle and regulate earth temperature. As deforestation keeps carry out,
the earth climate will change as there is no carbon dioxide and oxygen cycle.
Carbon dioxide absorbs heat and then the earth temperature rise and cause
global warming.

Back
What do you think about global warming? Global warming happens when
the earth temperature rises up. It happens when the greenhouse gases trap the
heat from the surrounding. What are the causes and the effects of global
warming? How to stop global warming?
The factors of global warming can be classified into two, which are natural
factors and human factors. First, natural factors, the changes in solar output
which means the amount of energy radiating from the sun is not constant. The
greenhouse effects also affect world climate. It happens because the presence
of greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide, methane, nitrous oxide and water
vapour. When the heat from the sun enters the earth, some of them are
reflected back to the space and some of them are absorbed by the greenhouse
gases. This causes the earth temperature to rise.

Moreover, aerosols are the factor that affecting climates too. Aerosols are the fine particles
and droplets that can linger in the atmosphere for quite a long time. These particles reflected
and absorbed incoming solar radiation. The change of type and quantity of aerosols in the
atmosphere will affect the amount of solar energy reflected and absorbed.
Next, human factor which affecting climates are the enhance of greenhouse effect. Several
of human activities release greenhouse gases, such as open burning, the use of
chlorofluorocarbon (CFCs) products like air conditioner and pesticides. Besides, CFCs also
cause the depletion of ozone layer. Furthermore, deforestation also the hidden cause of global
warms. Deforestation destroys the habitat of flora and fauna and it also drives climate change.
Tress helps water cycle and regulates earth temperature. As deforestation keeps carry out, the
earth climate will change as there is no carbon dioxide and oxygen cycle. Carbon dioxide
absorbs heat and then the earth temperature rises and cause global warming.
When global warming occurs, the natural food chain and food web are affected. For
instance, global warming cause the ice berg at poles to melt, the sea level to rise. The water
then covers some small island, plants and animals soon dead.




Additionally, some of the animals that cannot adapt to the sudden change
of climate, example mammoth, they finally extinct due to the climate
change. Furthermore, the rise of the temperature causes the decline in the
yield of crops due to dry and infertile soil.
How to reduce global warming? First, reduce the burning of fossil fuels. We
can use lead-free petrol instead of fossil fuels. Besides, we should reduce
deforestation and practise replanting. Moreover, non-renewable energy should
be used wisely, and develop other sources of energy such as solar energy,
wind energy, and geothermal energy. Rather than using owns transport, we can
choose car pooling or public transports to reduce the emission of carbon
monoxide.
Global warming is a severe current issue nowadays. Action should be taken
to control the situation. It is not about individual problems, but related to whole
world, every human being should be responsible in taking care of our mother
Earth before it is too late. (Conclusion)

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