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    The document provides tips to avoid boring sentences by suggesting adding new words, changing existing words, or providing more detail to describe actions and subjects. It demonstrates improving basic sentences by making them more descriptive and interesting, such as changing "The man got in the car" to "The serious man carefully got in the sporty car" or "The gentleman climbed into the Ferrari." The overall message encourages the reader to practice enhancing sentences to engage readers and avoid putting them to sleep.

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    The document provides tips to avoid boring sentences by suggesting adding new words, changing existing words, or providing more detail to describe actions and subjects. It demonstrates improving basic sentences by making them more descriptive and interesting, such as changing "The man got in the car" to "The serious man carefully got in the sporty car" or "The gentleman climbed into the Ferrari." The overall message encourages the reader to practice enhancing sentences to engage readers and avoid putting them to sleep.

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    Ban Boring Sentences

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    Ijun Ingah
    The document provides tips to avoid boring sentences by suggesting adding new words, changing existing words, or providing more detail to describe actions and subjects. It demonstrates improving basic sentences by making them more descriptive and interesting, such as changing "The man got in the car" to "The serious man carefully got in the sporty car" or "The gentleman climbed into the Ferrari." The overall message encourages the reader to practice enhancing sentences to engage readers and avoid putting them to sleep.

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    Ban boring sentences!

    There are a few ways to


    stop your sentences
    putting everyone to sleep.
     Add words in.

    The mouse ate cheese.


    The greedy mouse quickly ate
    the hard cheese.
     Let’s look at another.

    The man got in the car.


    The serious man carefully got
    in the sporty car.
     You could also change words!

    The man got in the car.


    The gentleman climbed into the
    Ferrari.
     Let’s try one more.

    The monkey ate some fruit.


    King Kong gobbled plenty of
    bananas.
    So to improve your
    sentences you need to…

     Add new words.

     Change some of the words.


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    Go on give it a try, I bet you CAN do it!

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