Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Unit 3
Steps to effective business
writing (2)
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
Example 2
Example 4
Example 2
Example 4
Example 2
Wordy : I am writing this letter because Mr. Brown
suggested me to conduct the training in
your organisation.
Concise : Mr. Brown suggested me to conduct the
training in your organisation.
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
Example 3
Wordy : This is to inform you that you will receive
your books this week.
Concise : You will receive the Business Writing
books this week.
Example 4
Wordy : It goes without saying that we agree to
the terms and conditions of this company.
Concise : We agree to the terms and conditions of
this company.
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
Revising for Conciseness
Example 2
Wordy : The work offers extraordinary challenges
and a large salary.
Concise : The work offers challenges and a large
salary.
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
Example 3
Example 4
Wordy : I am extremely interested in this position.
Concise : I am interested in this position.
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
Example 2
Wordy : Many people preferred cars that were silver in
color and shiny in appearance .
Concise : Many people preferred silver, shiny cars.
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
Example 3
Wordy : Please refer back to the contract.
Concise : Please refer to the contract.
Example 4
Wordy : The latest Dell “Inspire 1300” laptop is
small in size.
Concise : The latest Dell “Inspire 1300” laptop is small.
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
7. Avoid Jargons
Sample Jargon
2.
Quality Management – Accreditation, Audit, Auditor, …
8. Avoid Slang
Example 2
9. Avoid Clichés
Example
Example 2
Example 4
Example 2
General : That company’s advertisement won the award.
Concrete : Telekom Malaysia’s advertisement won
the award.
WRITING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS TEXTS
Revising for Concreteness
Example 2
Delete Insert
Lowercase Insert
Punctuation
Transpose Insert Period