Professional Documents
Culture Documents
with Confidence
Advancing English communication skills
for the 21st century
EEI-American English
Session 5
The 4CS in Writing
Write More Clearly and Concisely
1 Use definite, specific, concrete language
numbers
dates and time
places
names
Anticipate and answer Wh and H questions
Cause:
Result:
Clear
When the budget director discovered an error in the office
manager’s estimates, he telephoned the office manager.
Abstract VS Concrete Language
The choice of appropriate
safety gears lies within the
engineer.
Zombie Nouns
Subject
Action
Object
I’d like to ask for the schedule of the training this June.
I’d like to ask you for a meeting on June 4th, at 10am.
I’d like to ask you to vote on your choice of influencer.
I’d like to request a meeting on June 4, 10 am.
I’d like to request the schedule for the training.
I’d like to request that you come early to the meeting.
Requesting information or action
■ Could I/we/you…
■ Could I get the dates, time and venue of the training this
June?
■ Could I meet with you on Wed, June 22, at 2pm to discuss…?
■ Could you send me the schedule for the training this June?
■ Could you give me the schedule for the training this June?
■ Could we meet on Wednesday
■ Could we sit down and finalize the training schedule on Wed,
June 22 at 2pm?
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• The reason we shipped the wrong cargo is that we couldn’t
understand your handwriting.
• Please write in print the information clearly and legibly to
ensure successful shipment of your cargo.
Complaining
I’m writing to complain about a delayed delivery…
I’d like to complain about an error in my account statement…
This is to let you know that an error has been made in…
I’m afraid there’s been a delay…
You need to pay your bill or we have no choice but to cut off your
service.
Sincerely,
Carolyn James
Points for editing exercise
■ Subject line
■ Concise – delete first part
■ Spacing/block style
■ State the purpose at the beginning
■ Email flows well
■ No grammatical mistakes
■ Next step/when to send the information
■ Signature block
■ Give contact information
■ Includes all necessary information
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Improved email
Dear Mr. Gleason,
Our company would like some information regarding the HB-340 portable
printer.
I would appreciate it if you could provide answers to the following questions:
• Is it a laser printer?
• Is it battery operated?
• Can it print out legal-size documents?
It would be great if you can send the information by Friday, February 22, as
I will need to discuss this with my supervisor.
If you have any questions, please contact me at 867-5309
Sincerely,
Carolyn James
(signature block)
Building
Grammatical Competence
in Writing
Adjective or Adverb ?
1. Speak (soft, softly) or don’t speak at all.
2. You must send payments (regular, regularly).
3. He can speak (good, well).
4. Dennis plays tennis as (good, well) as Bruce.
5. We deal with clients on a (strict, strictly) cash basis.
6. You can see the mountains _____ with these binoculars. (clear)
7. When you’re a parent, you’ll think _____ about children. (different)
8. I feel ____ enough to go out at night. (safe)
9. Her perfume smells _____. (terrible)
10. I felt ____ (bad) about not having done _____ (good) in the exams.
Subject + Verb Agreement
1.He studied hard for the test so he made (few, a few) errors.
2.He didn’t know the route so he made (few, a few) wrong turns.
Find and correct the s-ending
errors in the following invitation
Corro Communications are pleased to announce the promotion of
August Samuels to assistant vice president of marketing. The former
advertising director of our South and Midwest divisions bring to her
new job a wealth of dedication and experience.
Ms. Samuels new office will be located in the New York Headquarters
building at 1 Sixth Avenue.
R.S.V.P.
David Nathan
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Writing Good Sentences
Simple and Compound Sentences
Clause = noun phrase + verb phrase
Compound Sentence = 2 clauses or more (joined by and, or, nor, but, so, then, yet)
I shouted and everybody waved.
Use compound
sentences
Complex Sentences
Complex sentence = 2 clauses (or more)
= 1 main clause + 1 or more adverbial clause
ADVERBIAL CLAUSES COMMON CONJUNCTIONS
Contrast clauses although; though; even though; while;
Reason clauses because; since; as
Place clauses where; wherever; everywhere
Purpose clauses so that; so; because + want
Result clauses so that; so … that; such … that
when; before; after; since; while; as; as
Time clauses
soon as; by the time; until
Conditional clauses if; unless; provided (that); as long as
Examples:
Her father died when she was very young.
She had a difficult childhood because her father died when she was very young.
Although she has always lived in France, she speaks fluent English because her
mother was American and her father was Canadian.
Put the right conjunctions in the
blanks.
By the time wherever provided that so
Since so that While the way
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What do you think of the following email?
Hello,
This message is to inform you that we, unfortunately,
have to cancel this year’s Corgi Festival.
Regards,
DFLO
Five-Step Writing Process
• Know your audience
– Above or below in rank?
– One or many? (primary and secondary audiences)
– What is my relationship with the audience?
– What is the most likely reaction? (effect, expectations)
– Cultural norms/etiquette