- Organization refers to the arrangement of ideas in a
text. - It is the way a text is organized that helps to guide the reader logically through it. This property makes a text readable and its message clear. Techniques to achieve organization: 1. Physical Format The format is an aspect of the organization that is immediately apparent to the reader. It is seen in how the text physically appears like headings and subheadings, bullet points or font emphasis. However, use this technique with discretion as improper or superfluous formatting can be confusing. Example: Marxist ideology has three main theories. Historical materialism purports that all the features of society can historically be traced back to economic activity. Social class in capitalist societies is what produces unjust structures of power that exist today. Socialism would be the next rational step for the development of human society. Techniques to achieve organization: 2. Signal Words Signal words are textual cues that readers can use to follow text. They can “signal” the transition from one point to another, the ordering of events and concepts, or the writer’s chosen text type (example: linear narration, question and answer). Example: Chuck Palahniuk’s novel Fight Club greatly influenced me as a fictional writer. First, his use of the unreliable narrator fascinated me, and I have written similar characters in my works. Second, the theme of patriarchal oppression can also be found in the stories I write. Third, the novel’s stunning twist is something that I have been trying to recreate. Thus, I am extremely grateful to have encountered Palahniuk’s genius early in my writing. Techniques to achieve organization: 3. Structure The structure provides the framework upon which the text is organized. It consists of the following: - Beginning: introduction, thesis statement, hook - Middle: supporting details - End: conclusion, summary, final message. Example: Ancient philosophies believe that a person has an “aura,” this appears as a rainbow of light around the body that can be seen by individuals with clairvoyant abilities. The colors change depending on one’s mood, health, and thoughts. Some scientists believe that the existence of the aura has something to do with the electromagnetic fields produced by cells and tissues in the human body. Whether auras are real or not, the fact remains that there are forces everywhere that are real even though we cannot see them. 2. Proper Language Use Proper language use allows you to capture the message that you want to convey to your readers. It is all about choosing the right words that accurately capture your ideas. However, writers sometimes encounter problems with the following: Misused Words Words with Unwanted Connotations Technical or Highfalutin Words Misused Words A writer might sometimes use a word incorrectly, and this occurs when the word does not mean what he or she thinks it does. It is important to be certain of the definition of a word before using it; this often happens with words that sound or look alike. Example:
There are many behaviours that past societies
considered legal but are now deemed amoral including slavery, sexism, and racism. Words with Unwanted Connotations There are words that take on a meaning specific to a context. Some writers might not be aware of these connotations, so they end up using language that is unintentionally confusing, comical or even offensive to readers. Example:
The coast guard salvaged Priscilla and her sister
after their fishing boat was damaged in the storm. Technical or Highfalutin Words Writers want to sound smart by using that are very technical or have deep meanings. Though some writing genres require the use of such words, writers should still be careful about using them since they make readers work harder to understand texts. Example:
There is an ongoing discourse about the
antidisestablishment assemblage and the administrative political body. 3. Coherence and Cohesion Coherence and Cohesion make your text easier for your readers to follow and understand. Cohesion is the connection of ideas to the central concept of a text Coherence is the relationship of ideas between sentences. Both should be present in your text because having one without the other will still confusion for readers. 3. Coherence and Cohesion A text with cohesion has a central concept or “glue” that holds all the different ideas together. Although without coherence, there is no apparent logic to the way these ideas are presented. The writer appears to move on to another related ideas without a proper transition from the previous ideas. Example: Cubism is an avant-garde art movement that started in the early 20th century in Europe. A famous Filipino cubist painter is Vicente Manansala. He is a National Artist of the Philippines in Visual Arts. Did you know that visual arts have different forms including architecture, video, and textile? 3. Coherence and Cohesion A text with coherence has ideas that are logically sequenced in a way that is easy to follow for the reader. Although without cohesion, no central concept links all these ideas together. The main point of the text remains unclear for readers. Example: My favorite painting is “The Weeping Woman” by Pablo Picasso, which is an intriguing painting that symbolizes suffering. As a result, I love bright primary colors, so I wear a lot of shocking yellows, blues, and reds. Also, as an outgoing person, I enjoy performing for large crowds. In the end, people should not judge an artist’s talent based on one standard. 3. Coherence and Cohesion A text with both cohesion and coherence has a central concept linking all the ideas in the text, and these ideas are presented in a logical manner. The main point is clear, and the text is easy to follow and understand. Example: International Women’s Day is celebrated on the 8th of March of every year. It began as a Socialist political event in several Western countries. Then, other countries also started celebrating the holiday just as a way to express their love for women. Currently, the United Nations observes the holiday as a way to bring to light women’s issues around the world. 4. Appropriate Language Use Appropriate language use refers to the acceptable style of language for a particular form of text. For business correspondences, for instance, the style must be concise and formal which is why writers of such texts should not use wordy phrases and must have a courteous tone to it. For literary pieces, on the other hand, the language and style may be less formal and more creative. 4. Appropriate Language Use It is important that you make good choices when it comes to language use because how you use language affects the tone of the text and the readers’ interpretation of it. Before writing, you have to think about and consider your target audience. Determine when it is appropriate to use formal language or when informal language is acceptable
1. Informal language is usually used in writing for
oneself or in writing to family, friends, and colleagues. 2. formal language is used in writing academic, business, and official texts. Example
1. We asked the secretary to call the professor and get
her permission for us to continue our research.
2. We requested that the secretary contact the professor
and obtain her permission for us to continue our research. When you write, you should also make sure that the language you use is direct and simple rather than complicated so that readers would easily understand the text. If your readers are the youth, then you should use words that are familiar to young people. Why Sunglasses Are a Must-Have for Kids (An Excerpt) (NewsUSA) Most parents know how damaging the effects of ultraviolet radiation (UVR) can be to our skin, which is why they dutifully slather sunscreen on their kids during the summer. But one thing that often gets overlooked is protecting their children’s eyes. According to vision- care experts, kids receive three times more UV exposure than adults annually, yet less than 30 percent of parents currently protect their children’s eyes with sunglasses. The reason for concern is that children and adolescents are particularly vulnerable to the sun’s rays because their ocular lenses are not mature enough to filter UV light as effectively as adults, causing damage to the retina. “Everyone buys into what happens to your skin when it comes to sun damage, but many parents are really surprised to learn about the cumulative UV damage to the eyes,” Dawn Hartman, an optometrist at Columbus Ophthalmology Associates in Columbus, Ohio, told the Wall Street Journal in an interview. But the right sunglasses can help, as parents become more aware that protection from the sun is not just skin deep. Source: (USA, NEWS USA, 2016) http://www.copyrightfreecontent.com/health/why-sunglasses-are-a-mus You should also be sensitive enough to use unbiased language so that you will not offend any individual or any particular group of people.
Unbiased language is language that is free of racial
bias, free of religious bias, and free of gender bias. Example
1. A teacher should make it a point to motivate her
students.
2. Teachers should make it a point to motivate their
students. Language Use Tips 1. Use clear and concise sentences. On average, a sentence is 18words long. Note that this dies not require every sentence to be composed of exactly 18 words. 2. Avoid redundancies, wordiness, clichés, and highfalutin language. 3. Avoid excessive use of “there” and “it” structures. These sentences can be revised by dropping “there” and “it” phrase and transforming the sentences appropriately. Language Use Tips 4. Use precise vocabulary. Be accurate and condense lengthy phrases into fewer words.
5. Be consistent with your pronoun’s point of view.
6. Avoid sexist language
7. Use appropriate level of formality.
4. Proper Mechanics Mechanics refers to the conventions of writing which includes capitalization, punctuation, spelling, numerals, abbreviations, acronyms, and contractions. You may have experienced being confused as to whether you have committed an error in grammar or mechanics when you accidentally put an apostrophe in the possessive pronoun it’s or in the plural form of a noun such as cat’s. These errors are not errors in grammar since you have demonstrated that you know the rules in forming the possessive pronoun and plural. Since you made a mistake in the use of punctuation, you committed an error in mechanics. Spelling When you write, always make sure that you are consistently using one standard with regard to the spelling of your words. Remember that there are slight differences in American English spelling and British English spelling. Example: American Spelling British Spelling Color Colour Defense Defence Organize Organise Traveled Travelled Theater Theatre Learned Learnt Airplane Aeroplane anesthesia Anaesthesia Analyze Analyse aging Ageing Punctuation Punctuation is the act of using a system symbols such as the comma, period, quotation marks, question marks, etc. that are used to give structure to and organize a text. The use of punctuation guides the reader regarding how the text should be read. Examples: I love to paint portraits I would paint one every day if I had the time. I love to paint portraits. I would paint one every day if I had the time.
This book is dedicated to my parents, Noel and Corazon.
This book is dedicated to my parents, Noel, and Corazon. Capitalization
Capitalization is the act of writing the first letter
of a word in uppercase while the rest of the letters are in lowercase. There are rules in capitalization that one has to remember. Examples: PROPER NOUNS Ex. Alex, Manila
PROPER ADJECTIVES Ex. Canadian
DAYS OF THE WEEK
Ex. Monday, Tuesday
MONTHS OF THE YEAR
Ex. January, December Examples: SPECIFIC COURSE TITLES Ex. Theater 101 KINSHIP NAMES USED IN PLACE OF PERSONAL NAMES AND FOLLOWED BY PERSONAL NAMES Ex. Grandma, Dad, Aunt Paz, Uncle Alvin. ADJECTIVES, VERBS, ADVERBS, NOUNS, AND PRONOUNS IN A TITLE AND THE FIRST AND LAST WORD IN A TITLE Ex. Through the Looking-Glass, and What Alice Found There (literature)
HISTORICAL PERIODS, EVENTS, DOCUMENTS
Ex. Great Depression, the Renaissance, the Constitution Key Points: Informal language is used in writing for oneself and to family, friends, and colleagues, while formal language is used in writing academic, business, and official texts. Using simple, direct, and familiar language rather than choosing complicated words would make a text easier to understand. Using unbiased language could prevent offending any individual or any particular group of people. Mechanics are conventions that have to be considered in writing. Some of these conventions are punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. The following should be observed in academic and more formal texts: Always use standard English. Avoid contractions (e.g. shouldn’t) Avoid exclamation marks unless they are part of a direct quotations. Mention the full name of the institution or organization with the abbreviation in parenthesis, in first mention. Thereafter, use the abbreviation. Numbers from zero to ten should be spelled out while numbers higher than ten should be written in figures. Generally, citations are used in academic and formal texts. However, they are sparingly used in business texts. -END OF THE LESSON- Thank you for Listening!