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Dear MR Kilmer Lesson 251120
Dear MR Kilmer Lesson 251120
Kilmer
Model Question and Answer on Theme
• Paragraph One . Introduction:
• The novel Dear Mr Kilmer is worth reading.
• The novel highlights many crucial themes and determination is one of
them.
• The main character, Richard proves that determination helps him to
achieve his dream, hope or wish that is to do the right thing in life all
the time.
Point 1
• Firstly, Richard’s determination helps him to save innocent wildlife.
• In Chapter 1, Richard goes hunting with his father and brother, Gus. His
father expects Richard to get his first hunt with success.
• Richard hesitantly raises his rifle and aims towards the buck. Richard
believes in doing the right thing that is not to shoot the buck, and
finally misses the shot.
• His determination to save the buck’s life helps him to achieve his
dream.
• We must always try to do the right thing even though our action may
not be liked by others.
Second Point
• Secondly, we can see Richard’s success in doing the right thing that is
to support Hannah when she is down.
• One day, the tavern which belongs to the Schermer’s is vandalised
and Mrs Hansen asks her pupils to sign the sympathy card which will
be sent to Hannah.
• The card is passed around in class but in the end, nobody signs it
except Richard. Richard’s determination is clearly seen here as he
does not care what his classmates would say or do to him.
• All he cares is to do the right thing that is to sign the card and comfort
Hannah.
Point Three
• Finally, Richard’s determination has helped him to achieve his dream of
doing the right thing when he rejects his role as a Doughboy.
• This is because Hannah rejects her roles as she does not want to create
any more troubles.
• Richard is determined to defend Hannah up to the extent he is willing
to reject his role as a Doughboy.
• Richard wants to do the right thing that is not to practice prejudice and
support his friend Hannah no matter what happens.
• Obviously his determination helps him to achieve what he wants or
dreams of.
Conclusion