WRITING

WITH AWARENESS ,
WITHOUT CONFUSION
ZAHRA AFTEH
:ESSAY
:ESSAY
An essay is an organized discussion
of a topic in a series of paragraphs.
PARTS OF AN ESSAY

Introduction: 1. Motivator 2. Thesis statement 3. Blueprint

Body: topic sentence, major support, minor support

Conclusion: Rephrasing the thesis with a bit certainty

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:IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay

.You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

The rate of unemployment in some countries is high. Because of this,
there is no need to complete an education beyond a primary school
.level
.Write an essay either for or against this position
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
.own knowledge or experience
Undoubtedly, nowadays, the unemployment rate has risen and as a result less career opportunities there are. Therefore, a
significant proportion of graduates think of finding a temporary positions instead of entering higher education and
acquiring a university degree. However, in my opinion, these two facts should not be confused because education yourself
is vital not only to get a job in the future but also is beneficial for your progressing to a useful individual. So, no matter the
.situation which is prevailed at the job market, higher education must be supported and promoted
Little do we know about what will happen in job market in the next decade. Having said that, the thing that we can be
sure of is the importance of education. To begin with, someone who invests in his education, except from the learning the
he gets, also improves his mental health. More specifically, entering the university in not only about studying but also
socialising and exposing yourself to the new experiences. For instance, through university we are taught crucial values
such as approaching new people with ease, expressing our emotions, thinking outside of a box and challenging our
.believes by getting out of our comfort zone. Such important qualifications from our life in the future
Moreover, in the wake of high unemployment the education has a more signification role than ever before. Studying a
subject that you love and become an expert make you more competitive in the job market. Gaining such qualifications
.allows us to secure a position with more ease and confidence
In conclusion, we should not forget the present by thinking only about the future, but firstly, we ought to invest in
ourselves at the present in order to get the maximum profits in the future and this thing can only happen through
.education