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Overview of The
TOEFL iBT Writing
Section
• Assessing academic writing skills
• Presenting ideas in a clear, well-organized way
• 2 tasks/questions
Task 1: Integrated Writing Task (20 min’s)
o Read, Listen and Write
Task 2: Independent Writing Task (30 min’s)
o Writing from Knowledge and Experience
• 50 minutes
• Responses are typed on a computer keyboard
Useful Tips
• Practice paraphrasing words, phrases,
sentences, and entire paragraphs
• Understand the scoring guides for the
TOEFL
• Practice outlining before writing, and
writing following an outline
• Practice writing with complex structures
and academic vocabulary
• Understand the question completely
before starting
Question Types
TOEFL iBT Writing Section
Task 1: The Integrated
Writing Task
• read a passage about an academic topic for
three minutes
• hear a short lecture related to the topic
• summarize and explain the points in the
lecture in relation to the reading
• 20 minutes
• Common phrasing:
Summarize the points made in the lecture,
being sure to explain how they cast doubt on
specific points made in the reading passage.
Summarize the points made in the lecture,
being sure to specifically explain how they
support the explanations in the reading
passage.
Task 2:
The Independent
Writing task
• write an essay in response to a question
asking to give your opinion on an issue
• common phrasing:
Do you agree or disagree with the following
statement?
[A sentence or sentences presenting an issue
will appear here.]
Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer. Be sure to use your own words.
Do not use memorized examples.
• a good response: about 300 words long
• no maximum word limit
Key Strategies
Tackling the Writing Section of the TOEFL iBT
Strategy #1: Improve
your typing skills
• Type with both hands
• Become familiar with a QWERTY
keyboard
• Practice typing on several desktop
computers
Strategy #2: Example Topics
Anticipate familiar
topics for the Description and Explanation
Independent Task Describe an ideal friend.
Describe a good roommate.
• Familiar topics for the iBT Describe a good neighbor.
independent essay include four Describe a perfect husband or wife.
categories: Describe your ideal job.
Description and Explanation
Describe a good parent.
Agreement- Disagreement
Describe a beautiful city.
Preference
Condition
Describe a perfect vacation.
Describe an excellent teacher.
Describe your favorite book.
Describe your favorite holiday.
Describe the most important invention.
Describe your favorite gift.
Describe an important symbol of your country.
Describe the most important quality for success.
Strategy #2:
Agreement/Disagreement
Anticipate familiar Life is easier now than in the past.
topics for the Computers are a positive influence.
Independent Task Class attendance should be required.
• Familiar topics for the iBT Difficult experiences can provide important lessons.
independent essay include four Foreign languages should be taught to young children.
categories:
Description and Explanation Boys and girls should attend separate schools.
Agreement- Disagreement It is always important to be on time.
Preference Example Topics
Condition A first impression is usually correct.
School uniforms should be required in secondary school.
Playing sports teaches us about life.
Pets should be treated like family members.
Celebrities deserve the high salaries that they receive.
Experience is the best teacher.
It is a good idea to participate in activities at school.
Music is important in the lives of most people.
Strategy #2: Preference
Anticipate familiar Some students prefer a traditional classroom. Others
like to take classes online. Which type of class do you
topics for the prefer?
Independent Task Some people spend most of their money when they
• Familiar topics for the iBT receive it. Other people save as much as possible.
What do you think is better?
independent essay include four
categories:
Some teachers lecture for most of the class. Other
Description and Explanation
teachers spend part of the class in small group
Agreement- Disagreement
discussions. Which method do you think is better?
Preference
Condition Some people use physical activity to alleviate stress.
Other people prefer to escape in a good book or watch a
movie. Which plan do you use in stressful situations?
Example Topics
Strategy #2: Example Topics
Anticipate familiar
topics for the Condition
Independent Task If you could visit any country in the world, where
would you go?
• Familiar topics for the iBT
independent essay include four If you could change one thing about yourself,
categories: what would it be?
Description and Explanation
Agreement- Disagreement
If you could change one thing about your home
Preference
Condition
town, what would you do?
Strategy #5: Prepare facts, Attendance should not be part of the grading system in
university courses. In my opinion, the policy is misguided
examples, and experience because it does not encourage teachers to prepare
interesting classes, it does not take into account the
to support your choice and differences in students, and it does not set a positive
reason example for students.
• explain and expand on the major points (Example supporting details using experience)
in your essays with supporting details:
Facts Although many professors plan interesting classes, some
Examples professors do not provide additional information. In my
Experience experience, the lectures in about half of my undergraduate
classes were very repetitive. The information that the
professor provided was also available in the textbook or in
Example question: other course materials online. Since no value was added to
Do you agree with the following statement: the course by attending classes, the policy seemed to be
more punitive than positive. It would have been possible
Attendance should be part of the grading system in university
to earn an A without attending classes if the attendance
courses.
policy had not been instituted. Therefore, the policy
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure seemed to support the teachers who did not bother to
to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples. prepare their classes well. It did not seem to be in the best
interest of students.
Example answer: Disagree
Strategy #5: Prepare facts,
examples, and experience Attendance should not be part of the grading system in
university courses. In my opinion, the policy is misguided
to support your choice and because it does not encourage teachers to prepare
interesting classes, it does not take into account the
reason differences in students, and it does not set a positive
example for students.
• explain and expand on the major points
in your essays with supporting details: …
Facts
Examples (Supporting Detail Evidence)
Experience
However, research on learning styles confirms that some
students need the structure provided by a classroom
Example question:
Do you agree with the following statement: environment, but others learn better by reading and
researching on their own. For students who are
Attendance should be part of the grading system in university independent learners, the classroom time is not well
courses. spent, but they do not have the option to learn in a
different way without jeopardizing their grades. Instead of
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure spending their time productively, students who learn
to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
better by using resources in labs and libraries have to
interrupt their study time to attend class
Strategy #5: Prepare facts, Example answer: Disagree
examples, and experience Attendance should not be part of the grading system in
to support your choice and university courses. In my opinion, the policy is misguided
reason because it does not encourage teachers to prepare
interesting classes, it does not take into account the
differences in students, and it does not set a positive
• explain and expand on the major points example for students.
in your essays with supporting details:
Facts …
Examples
Experience (Supporting Detail Example)
EXAMPLE OF SUMMARY
During the Pleistocene period, four huge glaciers flowed and retreated in North America. Moving
south over the area now known as the Great Lakes, the Laurentide glacier changed the topography
of the region, leveling mountains and gouging out deep basins. When the climate warmed several
thousand years later, the ice started to melt, filling the basins with water. Thus, the Great Lakes and
the St. Lawrence Seaway were formed.
Strategy #8:
Paraphrase - don’t
repeat the same words
• 0 score for copying directly from a
reading passage or use words directly
from a lecture
• Use synonyms for the vocabulary that you
read or hear
• Learn the 4 techniques of paraphrasing
Source: https://www.futurelearn.com/info/courses/intermediate-english-for-university-study/0/steps/35241
Doubtful Verbs
allege
Strategy #9: Learn the assume
believe
verbs to express author’s claim
or lecturer’s point of view imply Neutral Verbs
• Use indirect statements and strong verbs propose describe Negative Verbs
to report the content information suggest explain • contradict the
• Choose verbs for your report based on suppose illustrate theory/idea/concept
the point of view: doubtful, neutral, suspect indicate • challenge the
certain, or negative think mention theory/idea/concept
• Learn and practice the verbs note • deny the
Certain Verbs theory/idea/concept
Examples: observe •
argue dispute the
The reading passage explains that… point out theory/idea/concept
The lecturer claims that… assert report • reject the
The lecturer rejects the theory that… conclude say theory/idea/concept
The lecturer argues that… confirm show
contend state
demonstrate
discover
find
maintain
prove
Different
Strategy #10: Show a Structures
Example Sentence
variety of sentence commas between parallel structures:
• For example, subjects became very irritable, those with children lost patience
structures – basic and Series with
parallel •
more often, and small problems bothered them more than usual.
Furthermore, the immune systems of a significant number of subjects were
complex structure depressed, they reported more sick days, and they had more colds.
Verbal: with an action verb Nominal: with a verb be (am, is, are, was, were, etc.)
Zoos often find or accept injured or abused animals. The majority of the animals are abandoned or
orphaned.
Animals in captivity do not enjoy as long a life as Holding animals in captivity is not the best plan for
those in their natural habitat the animals themselves
Why does the professor mention a seemingly What is the purpose of the lecture?
irrelevant anecdote?
Basic Grammar Rule #2: Verbal vs Nominal
Sentence – Common Errors
Common errors:
• Missing verb:
Incorrect: The passage explains that penguins in the region during their
whole mating season.
Correct: The passage explains that penguins are in the region during their
whole mating season.
• Double verbs (Verb be + base verb or past tense):
Incorrect: The lecturer was disagreed with the text in that the phenomenon is
illusory.
Correct: The lecturer disagreed with the text in that the phenomenon is
illusory.
Basic Grammar Rule #2: Verbal vs Nominal
Sentence Practice
Identify if the sentences are correct or incorrect. Try to correct them if they are.
1. historic
The The historic event
event is sosoimportant
important that
thatthe
thecountry
countrycelebrates thethe
celebrates dayday
as aas
national
a national holiday
holiday.
A. Correct
B. Incorrect
2. The scientists argue that the results of the study remain indecisive to make such
conclusion.
A. Correct
B. Incorrect
Harvard, one of the Ivy League universities in the USA, attracts a lot of bright students
3. Harvard,
from all aroundonethe
of world
the Ivy for
League universities in
the prestigious the USA, isthey
education attracts a lot of bright students
offer.
from all around the world for the prestigious education they offer.
A. Correct
B. Incorrect
Basic Grammar Rule #3: Use correct tenses
consistently
Be consistent in using verb tenses in your writing
Use present tenses to discuss scientific facts
Use past tenses to summarize a reading passage or lecture that you have read or heard in the past.
Use the same tenses throughout
Study the following present and past tenses chart:
present BE+ -ed (passive) is changed past BE+ -ed (passive) was changed
Basic Grammar Rule #3: Use correct tenses
Complete the sentences with the correct tense of the verb in bracket.
• In the 1992 experiment, the volunteers … (be) randomly selected to
participate as either a prisoner or a guard.
were
Relate for Integrated Task they serve as temporary medical facilities for injured or abused animals, and they
support research studies to improve animal health.
• organize the integrated essay:
1. summarize the reading
2. use a transition sentence to signal the
lecture’s support or contradiction Transition:
In contrast, the lecturer argues that the benefits are exaggerated and could be
3. relate the reading and the lecture point
achieved by alternatives to the zoo model.
by point
• See the example
Relate:
Even though it is necessary to protect endangered animals so that they can
repopulate, it is better to do so in the wild, as for example, in national parks or
conservation reserves, which have been very successful. He also mentions that
wild animals that have been injured or abandoned may never readjust to the wild
after they have been temporarily cared for in a zoo and then released into
their previous environment, or they may not adjust quickly enough to be able to
survive once they are released. In addition, some of the research conducted in
zoos may benefit animal health, but investigations of the life spans of animals in
zoos as compared with those in the wild indicate that animals in captivity do not
live as long as those in their natural habitat.
Question topic:
Government should fund space exploration vs projects on earth
Colon
Use a colon before a series. A colon is often but not always introduced by the phrase
the following.
When a whole language approach was introduced in the 1980s, phonics was replaced
by the following strategies [:] opportunities to read interesting literature, motivation
to become good readers, and focus on meaning instead of sounds.
Capital Letters
Use a capital letter at the beginning of the first word in a sentence.
[N]ow phonics is being reintroduced in many schools to supplement whole language
programs.
Strategy #16: Think
like a rater (Part 1) -
The three trees errors
• when practicing and preparing for a
response, think about what the rater will
expect
• avoid major errors that will confuse or
distract the rater
• Don’t worry too much about minor errors
– ones that don’t cause confusion
• Example of a major and minor error from
a similar spoken sentence:
Minor error:
(Written) “According to the lecturer, this
plant is categorized to three type.”
Major error:
(Written) “According to the lecturer, this
plant is categorized to tree types.”
Strategy #16: Think
like a rater (Part 2) –
Evaluator’s Checklist
• Use the Evaluator's Checklist
to get the best score
Strategy #17: Practice,
Practice and Practice
• Do practice tests of the TOEFL iBT Writing
Section
• Apply the strategies
• Keep a note of your challenges, and as
you come closer to the test day, focus on
tackling them
Performance Descriptor for The
Writing Section
What does your score say about your proficiency level?
The
Advanced
Level Test takers who receive a Writing section score at the Advanced level are typically able to
• Score range 24–30 write in English on a wide range of academic and nonacademic topics with confidence
and clarity.
• CEFR Level C1
Test takers who score at the Advanced level typically can
• Note: Test takers with
scores of 29 or 30 are Produce clear, well-developed, and well-organized text; ungrammatical, unclear, or
likely to be able to unidiomatic use of English is rare.
perform at CEFR Level Express an opinion on a controversial issue, and support that opinion with
C2. appropriate details and explanations in writing, demonstrating variety and range of
vocabulary and grammatical structures.
Select important information from multiple sources, integrate it, and present it
coherently and clearly in writing, with only occasional minor imprecision in the
summary of the source information.
The High-
Intermediate Test takers who receive a Writing section score at the High-Intermediate level are
Level typically able to write in English well on general or familiar topics. When writing about
complex ideas or ideas on academic topics, they can convey most of the main ideas.
• Score range 17–23 Test takers who score at the High-Intermediate level typically can
• CEFR Level B2 Produce summaries of multiple sources that include most of the main ideas; some
important ideas from the sources may be missing, unclear, or inaccurate.
Express an opinion on an issue clearly; some ideas and explanations may not be fully
developed and lapses in cohesion may at times affect a clear progression of ideas.
Write with some degree of facility; grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of
words may make the writing difficult to follow in some places.
The Low-
Intermediate
Level Test takers who receive a Writing section score at the Low-Intermediate level are typically
able to produce simple written texts in English on general or familiar topics.
• Score range 13–16
Test takers who score at the Low-Intermediate level typically can
• CEFR Level B1
Produce a simple text that expresses some ideas on an issue, but the development of
ideas is limited because of insufficient or inappropriate details and explanations.
Summarize some relevant information from multiple sources, but important ideas from
the sources are omitted or significantly misrepresented, especially ideas that require
unfamiliar vocabulary or are complex.
Write with limited facility, with language errors obscuring connections or meaning at
key junctures between ideas in the text.
The Basic
Level
Test takers who receive a Writing section score at the Basic level are typically able to
• Score range 7–12 communicate very basic information in written English.
• CEFR Level A2 Test takers who score at the Basic level typically can
Produce some text that is related to the topic, but with little detail and/or lack of
organization.
Convey some information from the sources or some ideas on an issue, but grammatical
errors, unclear expressions, and/or poor sentence structure make their writing difficult
to comprehend.
The Below
Basic Level
• Score range 0 - 6
Test takers with a Writing section score below 7 have not yet demonstrated proficiency at
the Basic level.
End of Lesson
References:
• The Official Guide to the TOEFl iBT® 6th
Edition (2020)
• Baron’s TOEFL Strategies and TIPS:
Outsmart the TOEFL iBT®
• Performance Descriptor for the TOEFL iBT
Test (2021)