ANALYTICAL

EXPOSITION
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AKTIVITAS 3
 KELOMPOK 5

ANISA NIDAUL K MILA MAULUDIA

DIKKA RAKEAN P

RAISA ZANATUL P

WINWIN DESRIANI
 Text 1

Question

1. What is it in the bottle? 

2. What is the man doing? 
3. Why is the man doing this?

Answer

4. handsanitizer
2. the man doing to clean up his hand
3. the man doing this so the hands become clean and all the bacteria die
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title Secret side effect of hand sanitizer.

to inform and convince readers that hand sanitizer is important to kill

purpose
bacteria.

Hand sanitizer is a liquid, gel, or foam 1.conjunction seperti: and, or, then,etc
generally used to decrease infectious
agents  on the hands. In most healthcare Languag
thesis e 2. be' atau preposition seperti; is, are, in,
settings alcohol-based hand sanitizers are
preferable to  hand washing with soap features etc.
and water. However, hand sanitizers
come with certain side  effects.  
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Argument 1 LANGUAGE FEATURES:
Firstly, hand sanitizer can increase the risk of eczema. Conjunction time: firstly
Using a hand sanitizer that contains at least 60% alcohol may increase the risk of hand
dermatitis or 'eczema’ because of the "increased contact with irritants and allergens.'
This commonly manifests on the skin with redness, dryness, cracks, and even blisters
that cause itch or pain,“ Caroline Nelson, M.D. a Yale Medicine dermatologist and
instructor at Yale School of Medicine, says.

Argument 2 Language features:

Secondly, hand sanitizer can irritate our skin.
They are antiseptic products—they are formulated to disinfect the skin. Vanessa
Conjunction time: secondly
Thomas, a cosmetic chemist, and founder of Freelance Formulations says "The primary Using simple present tense
disinfecting ingredient in hand sanitizer formulas is ethyl or isopropyl alcohol, and they
are formulated along with thickeners softeners and sometimes fragrances to curtail the
strong smell of alcohol. Frequent use of it can cause skin irritation, or dry out the skin. If
you have sensitive skin, the effects can be worse. The drying out is caused by alcohol."

Argument 3 language features:

Thirdly, "the overuse of alcohol-based hand sanitizers to safeguard against the
germs and infection-causing pathogens could inversely increase the risk of infection via
Conjunction time: thirdly
skin disorders. Overdoing may remove benign bacteria on the skin that is not good,"
says Dr. Norris.

Reiteration/conclusing Language feature:

The final thoughts from the doctors is that hand sanitizers are a good alternative
to reduce potentially infectious microbial load—such as viruses, bacteria, fungus—on
Using Simple Present Tense
the Conjunction Comparisons
hands or skin, if soap and water is not immediately available but it is not as good as (perbandingan): but
soap. Relying on hand sanitizers to keep hands clean may not be your best strategy
 Text 2

Question
1. What are the students doing? 
2. What benefit can the student get from this activity? 
3. What sports can you do during corona pandemic to keep your body healthy?

Answer
1. football sports
2. sweat,nourishing the body and increasing cooperation between teams
3. Geat a morning run and exercise of fitness

 
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Title : football game
Purpose : to tell and persuade the readers that football health for body

Thesis Language feature:

Sports develop the physical as well as mental Simple present tense,conjunction (to)
strength in students. Daily physical exercise is
essential for students because exercise not only
helps students to stay healthy, but also helps to
improve their emotional fitness. Here we are
discussing the importance of sports in schools.

Argument 1 Language fiture :

Sports help students to stay healthy. They help Conjunctions,Simple present tense
students to increase cardiovascular fitness and also
increase bone density. It also helps to reduce the
blood sugar levels, chronic muscular tension, and
strengthen the lungs. Students become more energetic
because of sports.
Argument 2 Language feature:
In sports activities, students not only play the role of team players Simple present tense
butsometimes they also have to play the role of leader. Knowing preposition,conjunctions,
that they have to lead the team will boost their leadership qualities,
comparisons
and this helps them to become good decision-makers. Being a
leader, their duty is not just to lead the team but also need to boost
and appreciate the team.
Argument 3 Language feature:
Sport activities develop cooperation and teamwork. Simple present tense,
When students are participating in any sports matches or conjunctions,preposition
competitions they need good teamwork, cooperation, and
coordination. Learning these skills during sports activities helps
them in various phases of their life, like in academics or future
careers. Students also learn how to cooperate with other
teammates to win and enable to respect the other point of views.
Arguments 4 Language feature:
Sports can boost emotional fitness. The physical activities help Simple present tense,
students refresh their minds and create happiness in them. Sports conjunctions,preposition,modal
also help students stay cheerful and emotionally fit by reducing
stress and mental depression. If students are emotionally and
mentally healthy, then it can also help in their studies and help
them achieve their goals. If students increase their interest in
sports activities, they can also make it a passion and even make a
career from it.
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Argument 5 Language feature:

Sports activities establish the qualities of discipline which help Simple present tense,thinking
in every field of life. The sports activities teach the physical verb,modal,conjunctions
mental and tactical training to students. Students should have to
follow the rules and regulations of the game, obey and respect
the decision of the coach. By doing this, students can realize
their goals and help them to gain success.
Reiteration/conclusing Language feature:
In conclusion, sports are important in schools because it Simple present tense,
teaches various skills to students. By doing sports activities preposition,modal,conjunctions
students can maintain their fitness and establish some social
skills such as leadership, patience, and team efforts.
Table 7 Text 1
Topic health
Number of arguments that 3 paragraph
the writer presents.
Main points of the Hand sanitizer can increase
arguments given by the the risk eczema, Hand
writer sanitizer can irritate our skin,
The overuse of alcohol-based
Hand sanitizer
Text 2
sport
4 paragraph
Sports help students to stay
healthy, Sports activities,
Sports activities develop
cooperation and teamwork,
Sports can boost emotional
fitness, Sports activities
etablish the qualities of
discipline
The writer’s The final thoughts from the doctors is that hand
conclusion sanitizers are a good alternative
to reduce potentially infectious microbial load—
such as viruses, bacteria, fungus—on thehands or
skin, if soap and water is not immediately
available but it is not as good as soap. Relying on
hand sanitizers to keep hands clean may not be
your best strategy
In conclusion, sports are important in schools
because it teaches various
skills to students. By doing sports activities
students can maintain their fitness and
establish some social skills such as
leadership, patience, and team efforts .

Possible impact of increase awareness of readers to always increase the reader's enthusiasm to
the text to the clean hands with soap or hand sanitizer exercise
readers
The communicative sanitizer are a good alternative to reduce physical exercise is essential for students
purpose of the potentially infectious microbal load-such asa because exercise not only helps students
text:Hand viruses,bacteria,fungus-on thr hands or skin . to stay helathy,but also helps to improve
their emotional fitness.

Tense mostly Simple present tense Simple present tense

used in the Text

Cunjunctions And,or,such as,if And,such as,for,not only,but,if

used in the text
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Similarities of Have the same tense and Have the same tense and
both texts keep the body healthy keep the body healthy

Differences of telling us about secret side persuade us how important it

both texts effect of Hand sanitizer is sports
 kesimpulan tentang conjunction apa yang
banyak digunakan dalam teks analytical exposition tersebut.
Conjunction used in the text 1 is conjunctions time ( firstly, secondly, thirdly)

Conjunctions used in the 2 is conjunctions addition and comparison (and, such as, for, but, if)
 Text 1

• Aspects of Text Kind of information Your findings

Social function • Topic • side effect of hand sanitizer(health)

• Purpose of the text • To inform and convince readers that hand sanitizer is
• The possible impact of the text to important to kill bacteria.
the readers • Making many people know the secret side effect of hand
sanitizer and start used hand sanitizer

Text structure • Arguments presented by the • Firstly, hand sanitizer can increase the risk of eczama.
writer Secondly, hand sanitizer can irritate our skin. Thirdly, "the
• The writer's conclusion about the overuse of alcohol - based hand sanitizers to safeguard
topic discussed againts the germs and infection - causing pathogens could
inversely increase the risk of infection via skin disorders.
• The final thoughts from the doctors is that hand sanitizers
are a good alternative to reduce potentially infectius
microbial load - such as viruses, bacteria, fungus - on the
hands or skin, if soap and water is not immediately available
but is not as good as soap. Relying on hand sanitizer to
keep hands clean may not be your best strategy

Language features • Tense that is mostly used in the • Simple present tense
text • Conjunctions time
• Conjunctions used in presenting • Conjunctions comparisons
the arguments
• Conjunctions used to make
conclusion
 Text 2

Aspects of Text Kind of information Your findings

Social function • Topic • sports game

• Purpose of the text • To tell and persuade the readers that football health
for body.
• The possible impact of the text to • to find out the benefits of sports and some types of
the readers sports for health
Text structure • Arguments presented by the writer • Sports help students to stay healthy, Sports activities,
• The writer's conclusion about the Sports activities develop cooperation and teamwork,
Sports can boost emotional fitness, Sports activities
topic discussed etablish the qualities of discipline
• In conclusion, sports are important in schools
because it teaches various skills to students. By doing
sports activities students can maintain their fitness
and establish some social skills such as leadership,
patience, and team efforts
Language features • Tense that is mostly used in the • Simple present tense
text • Conjunctions addition and comparison
• Conjunctions used in presenting • Conjunctions addition
the arguments
• Conjunctions used to make
conclusion
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