Portfolio ARW3

Gabriela León
ARW3
4:00 – 5:30
Index
• Unit 7: Writing process
• Notes on the topic
• Graphic organizer W1
• W1 first draft
• W1 first draft : evidence of correction
• W1 Final Copy
• Unit 8: Writing process
• Notes on the topic
• Graphic organizer W2
• W2 first draft
• Outline W2
• W2 first draft : evidence of correction
• W2 Final Copy
• Unit 7 and 8 Myenglislab: Writing proces
• Screenshot of the gradebook
Unit 7
Writing process
Notes on the topic
• Private schools are more expensive than public schools.
• Public schools are located in places with low taxes, while private
schools are not.
• Private schools have a teaching methodology that is not very
theoretical, public schools do not.
• Teachers in public schools are unprepared, while in private ones they
are.
Graphic organizer W1
EDUC TYPE 1 = Public EDUC TYPE 2 = Private
Teacher Basic topics, basic teaching but Prepared with complex themes,
good complex teaching and also good
Costs It is free, but the materials used He has a pension, sometimes
for the classes are not expensive, but the materials
used for the classes are not too
Exams They are short and easy, with a They are long and complex, with
scoring method the same scoring method
Methodology It is theoretical and difficult to It is more interactive and little
understand theoretical
Location Low Tax Places, and pay them Luxurious and busy places with
high taxes, and they pay them
too
Quality Poor quality and basic work Good quality and known,
topics complex topics
 W1 first draft
Private Schools .vs. Public Schools

Yesterday I was talking with a friend who studied with me, who, because of a personal problem, had to transfer her studies to
a public school, we talked, she told me several differences and similarities that our schools have, for which I was surprised. I
recapitulated everything and drew my conclusions. That's why I'm going to say the differences and similarities between
teachers and teachers of public and private schools. 
The learning covers points like teachers, cost, methodology, and many more. For example, my friend told me that in terms of
cost in public schools, you pay almost nothing, you only have to cover the cost of the notebooks, colors, or the uniform of the
school. Unlike the public, if you must pay a pension, which is usually expensive, some more than others, depending on their
popularity, the quality of the study of the area where the institution is. However, in both schools you must buy materials and
uniforms, being the cost that we have, so, in both schools, the people have to pay for something. 
Another point that she told me was about the teacher, "my teachers are unprepared, although it is true, they have an
education in between, but their way of teaching is still terrible, sometimes, what they say is not understood, and I have to
look for information on my own" she said. I replied that my school is not like that, since being a highly renowned school, the
teachers must always be prepared. In addition, my school has the International Baccalaureate, so the demand is much higher.
That is why teachers always had to have extensive knowledge of different subjects. However, we both share the same idea
that some teachers had another type of teaching that was simpler and more concrete, that is more didactic and visual, but
others were more theoretical and ambiguous, so, more difficult to understand. 
That is why I conclude that there is a big difference between public and private schools, either because of the differences in
expenses of money for board and use of materials or because of the difference between teachers and their ability to teach a
class, either by their previous knowledge or their work technique. I also believe that all schools (whether public or private)
should have the same academic curriculum, since taking examples from abroad, such as Germany, Unite States, or Spain,
their public schools are just as good as a private ones. We should apply the same here in Peruvian education. 
 W1 first draft : evidence of correction
Private School vs Public School

Last week I was talking with a friend who used to study with me, she had a personal problem, so she had to transfer her studies to a public school,
and she told me several differences and similarities that our schools have, for which I was surprised. I recapitulated everything and drew my
conclusions. That's why I'm going to say the differences and similarities between teachers and teachers of public and private schools.  

The learning covers points like teachers, cost, methodology, and many more. For example, my friend told me that in terms of costs in public schools is
nothing. You only have to cover the cost of the notebooks, colors, or the uniform of the school. Unlike the public, if you must pay a pension, which is
usually expensive, some more than others, depending on their popularity, the quality of the study of the area where the institution is. However, in
both schools you must buy materials and uniforms, being the cost that we have, so, in both schools, the people have to pay for something.

Another point that she told me was about the teacher, "my teachers are unprepared, although it is true, they have an education in between, but their
way of teaching is still terrible, sometimes, what they say is not understood, and I have to look for information on my own" she said. I replied that my
school is not like that. My school is highly renowned, so the teachers must always be prepared. In addition, my school has the International
Baccalaureate, so the demand is much higher. That is why teachers always had to have extensive knowledge of different subjects. However, we both
share the idea that some teachers had another type of teaching that was simpler and more concrete, which means more didactic and visual. On the
other hand, the teacher who has theoretical and ambiguous classes is harder to understand.

That is why I conclude that there is a big difference between public and private schools, either because of the differences in expenses of money for
board and use of materials or because of the difference between teachers and their ability to teach a class, either by their previous knowledge or
their work technique. I also believe that all schools (whether public or private) should have the same academic curriculum. Taking examples from
abroad, such as Germany, Unite States, or Spain, their public schools are just as good as private ones. We should apply the same here in Peruvian
W1 Final Copy
Private School vs Public School
Last week I was talking with a friend who used to study with me, she had a personal problem, so she had to transfer her studies to a public
school, and she told me several differences and similarities that our schools have, for which I was surprised. I recapitulated everything and
drew my conclusions. That's why I'm going to say the differences and similarities between teachers and teachers of public and private
schools.
The learning covers points like teachers, cost, methodology, and many more. For example, my friend told me that in terms of costs in public
schools is nothing. You only have to cover the cost of the notebooks, colors, or the uniform of the school. Unlike the public, if you must pay
a pension, which is usually expensive, some more than others, depending on their popularity, the quality of the study of the area where
the institution is. However, in both schools you must buy materials and uniforms, being the cost that we have, so, in both schools, the
people have to pay for something.  
Another point that she told me was about the teacher, "my teachers are unprepared, although it is true, they have an education in
between, but their way of teaching is still terrible, sometimes, what they say is not understood, and I have to look for information on my
own" she said. I replied that my school is not like that. My school is highly renowned school, so the teachers must always be prepared. In
addition, my school has the International Baccalaureate, so the demand is much higher. That is why teachers always had to have extensive
knowledge of different subjects. However, we both share the same idea that some teachers had another type of teaching that was simpler
and more concrete, which means more didactic and visual. On the other hand, the teacher who has theoretical and ambiguous class is
harder to understand.
That is why I conclude that there is a big difference between public and private schools, either because of the differences in expenses of
money for board and use of materials or because of the difference between teachers and their ability to teach a class, either by their
previous knowledge or their work technique. I also believe that all schools (whether public or private) should have the same academic
curriculum. Taking examples from abroad, such as Germany, Unite States, or Spain, their public schools are just as good as a private ones.
We should apply the same here in Peruvian education.
Unit 8
Writing process
Notes on the topic
Advantages Disadvantages
- Good work tool - Many distractors
- Good storage - It's not portable
- Allows remote communication - Virus
- Saving material such as paper - Expensive

Problem 1: Many distractors 🡪 Set a time range to use it

Problem 2: It’s not portable 🡪 Trade it for a portable device, like tablets.
Problem 3: Virus 🡪 Buy an antivirus for your device
Problem 4: Expensive 🡪 Search for sale of second-hand devices
Graphic organizer W2

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this
Outline W2
CAUSE I. The computer has a large capacity for storage.

Effect A. We can save differente large files, and this

facilitate our work
B. It offers you a better organization
1. Gives you good results on your work

MULTIPLE CAUSES II. Computers hace many distractions, games or

(A-B) videos on the internet.

Multiple effects (a-d) A. Obsession

B. Problems socializing

1. Consequence Effects
a. Insomnia
b. Poor school performancec
c. Loneliness
d. Causes anxiety and depression
 W2 first draft
Computer; good or bad?
Yesterday I was researching about computers for a school assignment and I learned several interesting things from it, did you
know that computers are as powerful as the human brain, they can perform around 38 quadrillion operations per second and
store around 3,584 terabytes of memory? Or that people who use computers blink less than usual so as not to miss anything
interesting? There are several reasons why people prefer computers to other devices, while others do not.
Thanks to the good storage of computers, large files can be archived. Computers have a very large storage capacity, you can store
several files with great heaviness. Having a good capacity in our computers helps us to have a greater ease in our work, making us
have a better organization and thus have a good result in our work. For example, a while back I had a big assignment and was
afraid it wouldn't fit in my computer. My dad offered to lend me a hard drive, however I watch out and it fit perfectly. That is why
computers have a good ability to archive important and heavy files.
The recent increase in obsession with computer games has caused children to suffer from numerous health problems, such as
insomnia. Computers have many distractions, such as games, videos on the Internet, of course you can use these media to have a
good time, if you use it incorrectly it can create an obsession, insomnia, causing you to have poor performance in your work or
school activities. A few months ago I met a person who had a very big obsession with a computer game, she began to generate an
obsession and lowered his performance in school. Therefore, computers can have distractions if they are misused and cause fall
over performance in your life.
The various distractions in computers generate social relationship problems, present mental problems, since being so focused on
an activity, they isolate themselves from reality and begin to have problems related to loneliness, causing them to have feelings of
anxiety or depression. I read in the newspaper that a young man end off his life because of the little social relationship he had for
wanting to play an internet game. This distractors can generate anxiety and depression in people due to the loneliness that it
causes.
To conclude, we can say that there are several reasons why people prefer computers or not, either because of their large storage
capacity, which makes them very organized. Or by having various distractions that can affect your personal, school or work life. As
a final recommendation, I think it's important for people to be able to stay away from the extremes of computer use, maintain a
 W2 first draft : evidence of correction
Computer; good or bad?
Yesterday I was researching computers for a school assignment, and I learned several interesting things from it, did you know that computers
are as powerful as the human brain, they can perform around 38 quadrillion operations per second and store around 3,584 terabytes of
memory? Or that people who use computers blink less than usual so as not to miss anything interesting? There are several reasons why people
prefer computers to other devices, while others do not.
Thanks to the excellent storage of computers, large files can be archived. Computers have a huge storage capacity, you can store several files
with great heaviness. Having a good capacity in our computers helps us to have a greater ease in our work, making us have a better
organization and thus have a good result in our work. For example, a while back I had a big assignment and was afraid it wouldn't fit on my
computer. My dad offered to lend me a hard drive; however, I watch out and it fit perfectly. That is why computers have a good ability to archive
important and heavy files.
The recent increase in an obsession with computer games has caused children to suffer from numerous health problems, such as insomnia.
Computers have many distractions, such as games, and videos on the Internet. Of course you can use these media to have a good time, but if
you use them incorrectly it can create an obsession, and then insomnia, causing you to have poor performance in your work or school activities.
A few months ago I met a person who had a very big obsession with a computer game, she began to generate an obsession, and lowered his
performance in school. Therefore, computers can have distractions if they are misused, and cause fall over performance in your life.
The various distractions in computers generate social relationship problems, and present mental problems, since being so focused on an
activity, they isolate themselves from reality, and begin to have problems related to loneliness, causing them to have feelings of anxiety or
depression. I read in the newspaper that a young man end off his life because of the little social relationship he had for wanting to play an
internet game. This distractor can generate anxiety, and depression in people due to the loneliness that it causes.
To conclude, we can say that there are several reasons why people prefer computers or not, either because of their large storage capacity,
which makes them very organized. Or by having various distractions that can affect your personal, school, or work life. As a final
recommendation, I think it's important for people to be able to stay away from the extremes of computer use, maintain a middle ground, and
Unit 7
Writing process
and 8 Myenglislab
Screenshot of the gradebook: Unit 7
Screenshot of the gradebook: Unit 8