Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Example:
Example:
Incorrect:
Wandering around the desert, the sun beat down on the
hiker.
Example
Correct:
The sun beat down on the hiker wandering around the desert.
Also correct:
Wandering around the desert, the hiker sweltered beneath the sun.
2. Dangling
Incorrect:
Feeling reasonably confident in his performance, his test was handed to
the proctor.
Example
Correct:
Feeling reasonably confident in his performance, Henry handed his
test to the proctor.
Also correct:
Henry, feeling reasonably confident in his performance, handed his
test to the proctor.
3. Squinting
Incorrect:
The teacher told the students when the class was over there would be
a study session.
Example
Correct:
When the class was over, the teacher told the students there would
be a study session.
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