Extended writing

These two poems are really odd especially stealing because of the vocabulary and
context if you look at the text it says things like 'The most unusual thing I ever stole? A
snowman' this shows that the narrator is very lonely because the item you stole out of
everything was a snowman where you could of robbed a bank with a group. The point
is that both poems have their odd parts. For example in Hitcher it says 'He was
following the sun to west from east with just a toothbrush' this quote alone says that
the narrator has a peculiar job and meets weird people.
In my opinion I think the narrator in stealing is lonelier because if the vocabulary used
like 'mind as cold as the slice of ice within my own brain' I'm going to highlight the
phrase slice of ice within my own brain because if you look at the words ice and brain
they don’t go very well together in real life it mainly represents being alone and sad.
To add on to my point hitcher is very wordy so some readers may not understand
the words/phrases used. If you go deep in the text he is very alone and if you would
read the text and picture it in your head you would see a guy in a messy apartment
with trash everywhere. To summarise this explanation both of the texts are just as
lonely as each other.(but if you were to put it in the context of the text its self
Hitcher is lonelier