(1) Visions of Mikayla’s favorite cooking show flashed

through her mind. (2) How exactly did Chef Luciano

What change, if any, toss the pizza dough; to flatten it and make a perfect
should be made in circle? (3) Mikayla placed the dough on her right fist
sentence 4? and then spun it into the air, trying to mimic the chef.
(4) Otherwise she didn’t realize how difficult it would
A. Change Otherwise to be to control flying dough. (5) Moments later dough
Unfortunately bits hung from the ceiling, clung to the counter, and fell
B. Change didn’t realize to the floor. (6) Mikayla’s parents surveyed the messy
to doesn’t realize kitchen when they arrived home. (7) Although they
C. Change difficult to were surprised, they were not upset about her attempt
dificult to make pizza for dinner. (8) “How about going to
D. No change is needed. Tony’s pizzeria tonight?” suggested Mikayla’s dad with
SLIDESMANIA

a grin. (9) “Surely someone at the restaurant can show

*highlight your answer* you how to properly twirl pizza dough.”
 (1) Visions of Mikayla’s favorite cooking show flashed
through her mind. (2) How exactly did Chef Luciano
What change should be toss the pizza dough; to flatten it and make a perfect
made in sentence 8? circle? (3) Mikayla placed the dough on her right fist
A. Delete the quotation and then spun it into the air, trying to mimic the chef.
marks (4) Otherwise she didn’t realize how difficult it would
B. Change going to be to control flying dough. (5) Moments later dough
having gone bits hung from the ceiling, clung to the counter, and fell
C. Change Tony’s pizzeria to the floor. (6) Mikayla’s parents surveyed the messy
to Tony’s Pizzeria kitchen when they arrived home. (7) Although they
were surprised, they were not upset about her attempt
D. Change with a grin to to make pizza for dinner. (8) “How about going to
over a grin Tony’s pizzeria tonight?” suggested Mikayla’s dad with
SLIDESMANIA

a grin. (9) “Surely someone at the restaurant can show

*highlight your answer* you how to properly twirl pizza dough.”
 Revise the Paragraph for Controlling Idea:
How Can You Revise Sentence 1 for a More Effective Controlling
Idea?

1. Dogs are, like, way better than cats, no doubt. 2. I mean, seriously,
who needs a moody furball that ignores you when you can have a
loyal and hyper doggo always ready to party? 3. Cats just sit around,
judging you with their snooty eyes, while dogs are out there wagging
their tails and being all awesome. 4. So, let's get real and break down
why dogs are, like, the kings of pets and totally leave cats in the dust.
Revise the Sentences Below by Choosing the MOST Effective
Transition Word or Phrase:

1. I finished my homework. I went to bed early.

2. She loves to read books. She rarely watches TV.

3. The weather was cold. We decided to stay indoors.

 Revise the Paragraph for Details:
One or more of the Sentences Does Not Add to The Paragraph.
Which Sentence(s) Should be Deleted? Why?

1. Owls, you know, those birds with big eyes and hooting sounds, are
actually pretty interesting when it comes to their role in the
ecosystem. 2. So, like, they fly around at night, and some people say
they're smart. 3. Turns out, they're kind of a big deal in maintaining
balance in nature. 4. Owls are like the pest control squad, keeping the
population of rodents in check by snacking on them. 5. It's kind of
weird, but they're doing their part in the ecosystem, I guess. 6.
Plus, their feathers are all silent-like, so they can sneak up on their
prey. 7. It's like a ninja move! 8. So, even though they seem mysterious
and all, owls contribute to keeping things in harmony in their own
unique, hooting way.