Week 11

Article #6, Citation Review, Research Proposal Examples

November 18, 2020
Agenda

Research Proposal Opening Topic Literature Review

Elements Examples Examples

Citation Review
Article #6 (Chicago, MLA, Questions?
APA)
Research Proposal Elements
Length: 1-2 pages double spaced in Times New Roman font, 12 points +
resource page of 10 resources (minimum), no annotations needed
Elements:
1) Identify the topic, General opening
2) Problematize, State of Knowledge/Deficit (through literature
review)
3) Working thesis or Research Questions
4) Argumentative/Comparative etc, style.
5) Data collection (what types of resources?
6) Formal paper or Conference presentation
7) In-Text Citations!!!!
Opening Topic Examples

1) In a recent study of 2000 musicians conducted by the International

Conference of Symphony and Opera Musicians (ICSOM) it was
reported that more than half those surveyed suffer from stage fright or
severe anxiety. As the study suggests, many professional musicians
must mitigate what is known as Music Performance Anxiety (MPA).
2) Human beings have historically been drawn to artistic acts in times of
struggle as a means of catharsis. Whether professional or amateur,
studies have shown that being creative allows space for emotional
processing (Gardener, 1990; Smith, 1975; Erins, 2020). Music
Therapy has emerged as a legitimate treatment method as a result.
Literature Review Excerpt #1

Podalsky (1954) claims that many centuries ago music was used to
treat mental health problems. People treated included famous
names such as King Philip V of Spain, King Ludwig II of Bovaria and
King George of Great Britain. During the 18th century Pargiter
published the first experiments involving music as a therapeutic
intervention (Buckwalter et al. 1985). Following further research it
was later recognised that music improves health by focusing on
the is finding ways of facilitating the integration of clients into the
community and to combat social isolation (Osburn 1998,
Wolfensberger 1998). This integration can be a very slow and
difficult process, which can be delayed further due to a lack of
availability of appropriate services within the community.
Literature Review Excerpt #2

The majority of research into the privacy paradox considers general internet
activities with a focus on e-commerce and social networking activities in
particular. Known as the privacy paradox, it is a documented fact that users have
a tendency towards privacy-compromising behavior online which eventually
results in a dichotomy between privacy attitudes and actual behavior (Acquisti
, 2004, Barnes, 2006). A certain degree of risk perception implies greater
knowledge of privacy protection strategies but appears an insufficient motivator
to apply such strategies (Oomen and Leenes, 2008). Thus, while many users show
theoretical interest in their privacy and maintain a positive attitude towards
privacy-protection behavior, this rarely translates into actual protective behavior (
Joinson et al., 2010, Pötzsch, 2009, Tsai et al., 2006). Furthermore, while an
intention to limit data disclosure exists, actual disclosure often significantly
exceeds intention (Norberg et al., 2007).
Article #6
Class Discussion
Citation Review
Chicago
Fix Me: Citation Example #1
Chapter in an edited book…

Gillam, Tony. Music and Mental Health Practice, Springer

International Publishing. 87-100. 10.1007/978-3-319-74884-9_6.

Is this correct?
Answer!
Bibliography:
Gillam, Tony. “Music and Mental Health Practice.” In Creativity, Wellbeing
and Mental Health Practice, edited by Vlad Petre Glaveanu and
Brady Wagoner, 81-100. Cham, Switzerland: Springer International
Publishing AG, 2018.
Footnote:
1. Tony Gillam, “Music and Mental Health Practice,” in Creativity, Wellbeing and
Mental Health Practice, eds. Vlad Petre Glaveanu and Brady Wagoner, (Cham,
Switzerland: Springer International Publishing AG, 2018), 87-100.
MLA
Fix Me: Citation Example #2

Chapter in an edited book…

Smith, Karen H. et al. “The impact of online training on facebook privacy.”

Censorship, Surveillance, and Privacy: Concepts, Methodologies, Tools,
and Applications. IGI Global, 2018.

Is it correct?
Answer!

Smith, Karen H., Francis A. Mendez Mediavilla, and Garry L. White. “The
Impact of Online Training on Facebook Privacy.” Censorship,
Surveillance, and Privacy: Concepts, Methodologies, Tools, and
Applications, edited Information Resources Management
Association, IGI Global, 2018, pp. 1947-1967.
APA
Fix Me: Citation Example #3
Chapter in an edited book…

Fabbo, A., Cavazzuti, L., Guglielmo, M. de., Giovanardi, P., Manni, B., Turci, M., Vaccina, A., Spano,
A. (2020). The management of elderly patients with COVID out of the hospital: The Italian
experience. In Covid-19 airway management and ventilation strategy for critically iii older patients,
195-209. Cham, Springer.

Is this correct?
Answer!
Fabbo, A., Cavazzuti, L., Guglielmo, M. de., Giovanardi, P.,
Manni, B., Turci, M., Vaccina, A., Spano, A. (2020). The
management of elderly patients with covid out of the
hospital: The italian experience. In N. Vargas & A.M.
Esquinas (Eds.) Covid-19 airway management and
ventilation strategy for critically iii older patients. (pp. 195-
209). Cham, Switzerland: Springer.
• Research Proposal Due Friday
• Peer Review Due Monday
• Peer Review Tutorial Monday (Half Hour
Class)
• Email/Book Appointment
Questions?
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