• Correct the following mistakes (Intermediate level students’

compositions)

1. Firstly, I’m going to present myself.

2. We registered in a multi-adventure camp for young people.
3. We did surfing and puenting.
4. Do you mind tell me about it?
5. In my opinion, your company have to change this treatment to customers.
6. I had to come back other day carry on the TV again.
7. Please, give me my money or I will take other way with this.
8. He had a medical review.
9. This holidays are more cheap than go to the beach.
10. Almost everybody were Spanish.
11. In my opinion is healthier Mediterranean food than fast food.
12. Actually, people are awared and informed of healthy ways of life.
13. Mediterranean diet is known like the best and healthy diet in the world.
14. We stayed at a camping for two days.
15. We decided to travel to Britain (France).
16. These were a fantastic holidays were we saw a lot of places and sightseeings

• Suggested corrections:

1. Firstly, I’m going to introduce myself.

2. We joined a multi-adventure camp holiday for young people
3. We went surfing and bungee-jumping.
4. Would you mind telling me about it?
5. In my opinion, your firm has to improve the way it treats its customers.
6. I had to go back another day and carrying the TV again.
7. Please, give me my money back or I will have to take legal procedures.
8. He went to the doctor for a check-up.
9. This kind of holiday is cheaper than going to the beach.
10. Most people were Spanish.
11. In my opinion Mediterranean food is healthier than fast food.
12. Nowadays, people are aware and well informed about healthy ways of life.
13. Mediterranean diet is known as the best and healthiest diet in the world.
14. We stayed at a campsite for two days.
15. We decided to travel to Brittany (France).
16. It was a fantastic holiday, in which we went sightseeing and saw a lot of places.

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