Name: Le Van Kien () ID:1101629125 HOME ASSIGNMENT 5

Improve the following sentences

Wordy: In a situation in which a class is overenrolled, you may request that the instructor force-add you.

You may request that the instructor force-add you if overenrolled class
Wordy: I will now make a observations concerning the matter of contingency funds.

I will now observe contingency fund problems.

Wordy: There is a need for more careful inspection of all welds.

All welds need to be inspected carefully.

Original: The establishment of a different approach on the part of the committee has become a necessity.

The establishment of a different approach on the part of the committee is

necessary. Original: An evaluation of the procedures needs to be done.

The procedures need to evaluate

Original: Separation of the steel from the brass is performed magnetically.

The steel separate magnetically from the brass.

Original: The chief measure of the new economic program's success will be indicated in the reduction of inflation.

The chief measure of the new successful economic program aim to reduce
inflation Original: It is necessary that we first go to the ATM, in light of the fact that I am out of cash.

We need to go to the ATM because Im out of cash.

Original: In this paragraph is a demonstration of the use of good style in the writing of a report.

This paragraph demonstrate the use of good style on writing report.

Original: The point I wish to make is that the employees working at this company are in need of a much better manager of their money.

The employees working at this company need to manage their money

better.