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So, How Bout that Draft?

If I had another 24 hours to keep working on my draft without turning it in, Id re-order it. I feel like its a bit haphazardly put together, order-wise, and I definitely plan on editing that. Another thing to change is my phrasing in the section about abortion. I want it to flow like the evolution part, but its such a multifaceted issue that it is hard to restrict it to just religious views. I also wanted more focus on the Loving v Virginia court case, but it ended up being part of my conclusion. Im not quite sure where else that could fit, though. Id also like more time for proofreading. Im pretty sure I had a few errors in citations, but those wont be too hard to change. Onwards!

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