Cole M We arrived, I didnt know where I was, it had taken us 5 hours to get there and my parents hadnt told

me where we where, I guessed it was a surprise. It was very dark outside. I stepped out of the car and knew where I was. I was at Disney land. The whole placed looked gloom and dark there was a giant Mickey mouse on the front of the place. I walked to the gate losing my parents in the crowed. I look at the Mickey Mouse again but this time the mouse had a knife threw its head, I blinked and it was gone. I stood there staring for a while then started walking. I still didnt know where my parents were and there were strangers everywhere. Soon I spotted someone I did know, my best friend, I ran to him, he turned around and hissed I jumped back. Startled I ran to the gates they opened right when I got there so I stepped inside. Soon something terrible was going to happen. Just as I entered, magically, all the gates slammed. I tried to get out but it was no use, it was locked. I shouted as loud as I could. No one could hear or see me because everyone had gone to watch the fireworks in the lagoon. I guess Ill have to stay here, I thought. Suddenly, I heard what sounded like Mickey Mouse? The whole park was closed, but I could still hear voices of kids screaming like if they were on a rollercoaster. Was it my imagination, or was I seeing ghosts riding a rollercoaster??? As I run up to the back exit I finally saw what I was hearing. It was an adult size Mickey Mouse running after me with a giant knife. I tried to open the back exit, but it wouldnt budge. BOOM!!! I heard another firework explode right above me. Just as I stared at it, there I saw some stairs going to Aladdins Palace. As I ran for my life, I saw that the ghosts from the rollercoaster were now getting off it and staring at me like they didnt want me to enter in the palace. Why did this have to happen to me? I thought, Why? Just as I was passing through the giant door, two giant axes came from each side of the door! As I flipped while jumping

over the ferocious axes, I saw a giant golden bazooka. I ran up to it and sadly saw that it was just one of those fake bazookas from Buzz Light-year. I ran and ran and ran for minutes until I finally lost them. And you think you can get out of this mess? said a loud voice. It was familiar, but I still didnt recognize it by its voice. As I stepped outside of the giant spaceship I was hiding in, I finally saw what was talking. It was Jafar from Aladdin. If you dont know who this Jafar guy is, it was the villain of the movie Aladdin. As I saw his freaky face in disgust, I could hear myself taunting Jafar. The old mean, cruel and bad man with his hideous body with the long black and red costume he was wearing. As I saw his giant head looking at me in disgust, I knew that this would mean war!!! I ran back to the bazooka and picked it up this time it felt heavy in my hands. I wobbled out the door to the concession stand where they were selling bloody heads. I scream and sprinted to the nearest ride. The man that controls the ride is walking around clumsily with bullet holes in his stomach. I jump on the ride and the man lays down his head on the control panel and I shot off. I yelled as hard I could. I am still griping the bazooka as I go around a loop. My vision blurs and there is a gap in the ride. I start to fall the gravity seems to keep switching. I crash and my vision starts to go blank. Im still holding the bazooka. Jafar walks up to me. I fell like Im in slow motion. I see all the important things of my life I see my self walking into this silly place I open my eyes for the last time and shot my bazooka at Jafar, he was the one that haunted this place. The bazookas missile exploded and hit Jafar right in the stomach. My face started to fell the heat of the explosion and my eyes closed. I could feel the sweat dripping down my neck and I took my last breath. I looked at the dyeing body his eyes were closed his mouth

was shut and he was very pale. There was the blood from the childs body leaking out of him very slowly. I started to turn around, there was a man with a pale face standing in front of the dead childs body he was staring strait at me. I gulped and swallowed down my fear. The man slowly walked too me as he was screaming, You murdered my son. He jumped on top of me and grabbed my neck. As I was choking down my screaming my last words blood spat out of my mouth on to his plane white shirt.