Peer feedback on final edit of my video

I have shown my final edit of the promo video to a couple of my classmates and friends to get their feedback on my video.

Emma Bates: I liked the video it was clear, informative and very to the point. I understand what it was trying to advertise as well. However I felt that it may have benefited from maybe some sort of music backing track.

Mark Rainsford: I like the video however in the middle of the video there is a jumpy edit which makes the video look slightly tacky, however I like what you have done with the over voice, it was very effective in getting across the information to the audience.

Dan Hill: I think that it is well edited together but I think the video is missing some music, I feel that if you had some music it would have made it livelier.

Ben Hagger: I think that you have made a very clear video and the voiceover makes it very clear and easy to understand, however some of the clips are slightly jumpy in the middle, maybe adding a transition to make those clips smooth out a bit might have helped. And lastly I think that the video is good but would benefit from music.

Lewis Hollings I like it I think it is really good and clear, I like the way the over voice narrates through each of the subjects and you put relating video to that.