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Sensory images are used to describe what the writer sees, hears, smells, touches, and tastes. It paints a clear description of people, places, objects, or events.
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Describe your bedroom. Imagine telling someone who has never visited you. There are many tourist spots to visit in Birmingham. Describe your favorite place to take visitors. You may want to tell what you will see, hear, smell and how you feel when you are there.
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Tell us what you see, hear, smell, taste, and feel on Christmas morning.
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DESCRIBE OR TELL WHAT A PERSON CAN SEE, HEAR, SMELL, TASTE OR FEEL.
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You are asked to prove something. Give reasons why. Present arguments against your reasons. Show them to be false. Take a stand Ask or call for an action.
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What are the key words that show its a persuasive prompt?
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Persuade a close friend to donate blood as part of a blood drive that your school is sponsoring for the Red Cross. Some of your kid brothers friends have taken up smoking and want him to start too. Write a convincing letter to your kid brother to not take up this habit. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper telling why citizens in Birmingham should support a tax increase benefiting the local public schools.
What is a narrative?
A narrative
Tells a story. Has chronological order and sequence of events. Has action.
What are the key words that show that these are narrative prompts?
You and your friend find a big box that is labeled Do Not Open. Your friend wants to open the box. Write a story about what happens next. Tell about a time when you made a serious mistake.
Two little girls found a wallet on the sidewalk. Tell what happened next.
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Ready to write? First determine what type prompt you have. You should read your prompt at least three times.
Expository--explain, tell how Descriptive--describe Persuasive---persuade or convince Narrative-- tell about a time when, tell a story
Use your scratch paper to brain storm and then make an outline, or web, for a five paragraph essay.
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Think Brainstorm-PACO
P-What is your purpose? A- Who is your audience? C- Content --What are
O- Organization --Think
how you want to structure your paper.
First Paragraph
Introduce your topic
Give 3 details, reasons, facts or steps in a process You will talk about in your paper.
Second Paragraph
KEY IDEA Descriptive(details) Persuasive (reasons) Expository (facts/steps) explanation elaboration
Third
KEY IDEA Descriptive(details) Persuasive (reasons) Expository (facts/steps) explanation elaboration
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KEY IDEA Descriptive(details) Persuasive (reasons) Expository (facts/steps) explanation elaboration
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KEY IDEA
explanation elaboration examples
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Fifth Paragraph
Conclusion
Summarize the points you made in the essay
go back to the introduction
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FIRST PAPAGRAPH
Introduce your topic
Give 3 details, reasons, facts or steps in a process You will talk about in your paper.
elaboration
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elaboration
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Conclusion
Summarize the points you made in the essay
go back to the introduction
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Additionally One First Second Next Anotherif Although Finally In conclusion Indeed Consequently
bad things
changing classes and teachers Ms. Trunchbull And Ms. Honey more freedom no line choose food
Sat test
miss school
compare to stale food more tests and harder stress-stomach hurts sitting in math longer makes me sick
might be boring
not get to sit with friends
PE clothes sweat
Fun to play & compete
spending time with friends Stars are key ideas or controlling statements. Explanations Examples, Evidence are listed below.
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This is an important step! Dont try to write your paper without doing an outline first.
Why?!
Sample Introduction
Although I have taken many wonderful vacations, my trip with my two best friends to New York City is one Ill always remember. This was a fantastic trip because of the sights we saw, the people we met, the plays we enjoyed, and the laughs we shared.
Whats the topic? Whats the plan?
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After you make your web or outline, start writing your introduction. Leave space at the top for two more lines. ( It wont count against you.)You might come back later to insert a little background information in the introduction. Remember to grab interest and show the plan of your paper in the introduction.
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Introduction
Have you ever thought about what are the good and the bad things in seventh grade? There are good things like changing classes and more freedom. Some of the bad things are you have to stay in school longer, you have SAT tests, and tests get harder. Stay with me as I explain the good and bad things about being in the seventh grade.
Lets start on the body. Go back to your web or outline for the second paragraph.
Good Fun Things -Changing classes and teachers -Ms. Trunchbull & Ms. Honey More Freedom - no line -See friends at lunch
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First I will tell you about the good and fun things about being in the seventh grade.You get to change classes so if one teacher is like Mrs. Trunchbull in Matilda, you are only with her for part of the day. If your teacher is like Ms. Honey you will enjoy a fabulous time with her. Another thing I enjoy is more freedom. We dont have to walk in straight lines as if we were soldiers marching off to war. Next, you can get your own food instead of having the lunch ladies get it for you. I like spending time with my friends so if there are not in one of my classes, I can see them at lunch.
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Next Im writing about the bad things you go through in seventh grade. First of all you have to take the SAT test. In elementary school you didnt have to worry about this kind of thing. The SAT test is like eating stale food because it can hurt you and it can be boring. The tests get harder as you go on. We have so many of them they can cause a major stress and make you feel like your stomach was just pulled out. At my elementary school we got out fifteen minutes earlier. Sitting in math class for that extra minutes makes me feel terrible inside.
Did you find the transitions? What are the key ideas? How does he explain his key ideas? What is the metaphor?
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Finally my next category is going to be things that come good and bad. First field trips are extremely fun because you can talk and miss school. However its bad if you go somewhere boring or cant sit with your friend. Everybody loves P.E. because we play real sports with competitiveness. But sadly when were leaving PE, my clothes get sweaty which doesnt feel good. Everybody knows the pluses and minuses of Homework! We have so much homework it just takes the energy out of you, which is bad. What is good about it is that the more homework you have, the better chance you have to pull up your grade.
Did you find the transitions? What are the key ideas? How does he explain his key ideas?
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Now we are ready for the fifth paragraph the conclusion which will summarize our main points or key ideas in the body.
Good and bad things freedom changing classes SAT test going to school longer tests Good and Bad Homework PE Fieldtrips
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In conclusion the seventh grade has good and bad things involved. Such as more freedom, and changing classes. Some other things are SAT test, going to school longer, and quizzes and tests. Homework, P.E., and field trips fall into both of those categories.
What are your transitions? Does the writer sum up what he written? Does he refer back to the introduction. This paragraph was from an actual essay written by a student for the state writing assessment. His organization gave him a four.
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Remember we said to leave a little space at the top. Lets look at a classmates essay and see why
What My Near Future Would Be Like Ive always found the solving of crimes by DNA evidence to be interesting. A forensic scientist is doctor who examines data. In the near future I would like to become a forensic scientist and help solve crimes. The steps I would have to take to achieve my goals are finishing school, practice the procedure of my major, and be successful in everything I do.
After rereading she came back to add a little background information. This is an important step Reread to IMPROVE.
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STORY TITLE
Introduction
Event Event
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What punctuation goes with the words said? Did you say quotation marks? Youre right!
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It was an early Tuesday morning in Tokyo Japan. The sun started to rise over Juan Lees house. Boom! Juan Lee and his friend Jen went to see what was with all of the commotion. Then the door came crashing down. It turned out that Juans Aunt Lee kicked the door down.
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Summary
Identify your prompt Plan your work with an outline. Give your work a title with an action word. Grab interest in the beginning Build your paragraph with explanations, examples, & evidence following the topic statement or key statement. Use strong action words Use vivid adjectives Use metaphors Finished? Reread & reread to improve and clarify.
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Credits
Created by Chris Browning for Arrington Middle School, Birmingham City Schools Maureen Autum Step Up to Writing Program Birmingham City Schools workshops presenters Jerrie Foster, Gail Brown, Theresa Thomas, Jacquelyn Washington, Janet McMiller State of Alabama workshop presentations Rhonda Silmon Teaching clear thinking before writing. Lecture Demonstration with Rick Shelton & Write Where You Are!
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