To:Prof.Musselman From:ChanTszChingJulia CC:LexisSmith Date:4/4/2014 RE:Unit4Draft1PeerReview PeerReview Intension:thetopicofthisprojectisBrutalism theauthorhaswrittenabouthowbrutalismcomefrom?thehistoryofbrutalism theoriginofbrutalism howdidpeoplereacttoit? youmaywanttoexplainmoreonBrutalismintheintroductionbecausetheexplanationiskind ofvague afteryouasked"So,howdidwegettothemodernest?""TotheBrutalist?

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