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AdvancedWritingforArts,MediaandDesign To:ENGW3314PeerReview From:TszChingChan CC:CeciliaMusselman Date:4/9/2014 Re:Unit4,Draft2 Comments:ThisclassgivesmeanopportunitytorefreshmymemoriesinBoston.Thescriptis writteninpreparingmyselfforthevideomaking.Thevideoactsasaplatformtoconclude myfouryearsofcollegelifeandpromoteBoston.Theintendedaudienceofthisvideoare collegestudentsorprecollegestudents.Touristsmayalsobemytargetaudience.Inthis video,Iwillsharesomeofmyfavouriteplacesormeaningfulspotswithmyaudience. Moreover,IwillshowthemwhatIhaveseen,learntandlovedaboutthisbeautifulcity.I hopetoborrowmyaudienceseyestotastewhatIhaveexperiencedinBostonandlet themknowmoreaboutthiscity.SinceIammajoringinCommunicationStudies. Therefore,thevideoitselfhasalreadybeenaforumforstrengtheningmymajor.

r. Furthermore,bymakingthisvideo,ithelpedmeinpractisingmycommunicationskills throughtranslatingmythoughtsinwordsandspeakingthemout.Itcanbekindofa communicationstrategysinceIamtryingtocommunicationwithotherpeoplethroughthis videoandletthemtoknowmoreaboutme.

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