Research and Planning Level:4 17/20 Very detailed analysis of previous gangster films Creative layout of each task Much more in depth in explanation to show his understanding Construction 38/60 The voice over isnt that clear maybe didnt use a microphone Speed up of the tempo was very creative as it created suspense at the beginning to create enigma
Name: Louise Mark Reasons Research and Planning Level 2 10/20 Very basic analysis Very minimal in explanation of previous gangster films Nice layout Didnt finish all of her planning tasks Construction 28/60 Scenes were too quick at times The camera shots were not accurate on the perfume clip it was too low so the shot wasnt clear The clips were quite jumpy and shaky at times didnt flow too well Didnt feel like an actual gangster film with too much text on the storyline meaning her final opening didnt have a clear message
Name: Joel Mark Reasons Research and Planning Level: 3 13/20 Some parts were quite basic however some were very creative and detailed such as his initial plan. Has a basic story board/ good setting Construction 40/60 Editing was very creative with freeze frames for each credit It was a bit jumpy at times didnt really flow well The tracking of the camera should have been lifted a little higher to show the change in scene clearer.
Name: James Mark Reasons Research and Planning Level:4 19/20 Very detailed notes and explanation Had a clear creative layout using different soft wares Consistent detail throughout whole blog Kept to his idea all the way through creating planning of fonts for details Construction 50/60 Creative editing use of non diegetic sound of a bell to change clip Used freeze frames for each credit to create character profiles Various shot types, panning Sound was in sync- used well to create tension and suspense Went a bit childish with the long fight scene