Marley Messner

Discourse Communities
Rough Draft Peer Review

Wendy,
Your formatting was perfect, all according to MLA. Your paper
flowed smoothly. You incorporated authors from the book but I
dont think you incorporated any other sources. That is the only
thing I would change/add. Other than that, you included all of the
essential parts of the paper. You were able to cover everything we
learned and the different views of each of the writers. I thought it
was a great rough draft! Good job!
Marley