Two's a Couple, Three's the

Law Rough Draft #2

by Autumn Caudle

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GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE

GENERAL COMMENTS

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Instructor

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Comment 1
See my comments in your f irst draf t.
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Title
Give your essays a creative title that hints at the topic. Don't just use the type of essay that
was assigned.

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First Line
First line indent should be 0.05 inch.

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Ital.
Italicize

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Thesis
T hesis needs work:
T he thesis is the central idea of your paper around which all your evidence and claims are
organized. Every single paragraph should be dedicated in a clear way to proving your thesis.
In your essay, the thesis should be stated as quickly and as clearly as possible. In f act, many
teachers will expect your thesis statement to appear in the last sentence of your essay's
f irst paragraph. A vivid thesis statement will announce the steps of its argument, not just
provide a f lat statement of the essay's ultimate goal. T hink of the thesis as a roadmap that
gives directions to your reader rather than as a picture of your f inal destination.

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Rhetorical Question
T he rhetorical question is usually def ined as any question asked f or a purpose other than
to obtain the inf ormation the question asks. Remove these f rom your academic writing.

Verb

T his verb may be incorrect. Proof read the sentence to make sure you have used the
correct f orm of the verb.
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Frag.

T his sentence may be a f ragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proof read the
sentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause
with a complete subject and predicate.

Proof read

T his part of the sentence contains a grammatical error or misspelled word

that makes your meaning unclear.
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Del.
Delete