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Writers Eye Feedback

What you did well:

Scor
e

Content

Organizatio
n & Unity

Word
Choice

Revision

Mechanics

Suggestions:

4 - Expert

3 - Practitioner

2 - Apprentice

1- Novice

Writing is
confident and
clearly focused
with a distinct,
unique voice/
point of view.
Connection to
artwork is clear
and creative.

Writing is
purposeful with
a strong
voice/point of
view.
Connection to
artwork is clear.

Writing is limited
in communicating
and voice/point of
view are weak.
Connection to
artwork is present.

Writing is extremely
limited in
communicating and
lacking in
voice/point of view.
Connection to
artwork is unclear
or not apparent.

Writing clearly
utilizes elements
of the Freytag
pyramid to create
a strong
beginning, middle,
and end.

Writing utilizes
some elements
of the Freytag
pyramid to
create a
beginning,
middle, and end.

Writing does not

incorporate
elements of the
Freytag pyramid,
and the plot is
unclear.

Writing is
disorganized and
undeveloped with
no clear plot.

Words are specific

and accurate.
Lively verbs,
precise nouns,
striking words and
phrases.

Words are
purposeful, but
lack flair. Some
attempts at
colorful
language.

Word choice is
vague, flat, or
lacking in variety.

Word choice is
vague and general.

Writing carefully
incorporates
substantial
improvements
from rough draft.

Writing
demonstrates
thoughtful
revision and
improvement
from rough draft.

Writing has only

surface changes
from rough draft.

Writing has very

few or no minor
changes from
rough draft.

Consistent variety
of sentence
structure
throughout. Few, if
any errors in
mechanics.

Frequent use of
varied sentence
structure. Few
errors in
mechanics.

Little variety of
sentence
structure. Several
errors in
mechanics.

Frequent run-ons
or fragments, no
variety of sentence
structure. Frequent
errors in
mechanics.