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TheThesis

Thestatementorstatementsthatdetailswhatyourtextwillbeexploringorwhatargumentsit
willbemaking.

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listingthemainpointsinthethesis
thisessaywillarguethatFrankensteinsmonsterisaherobecausehehateskilling,
savesachild,andhasanincrediblemarathontime
Beingtoovague
Frankensteinsmonsterisaherobecausehehasheroictraits
Tryingtoincludetoomuch
Inthenovella
Frankenstein
byMaryWollstonecraftShelleyDr.VictorFrankensteins
monsterisaherobecausehehateskilling,heloathedthefrequentmurdershefelthe
wasforcedintohesavesachild,thecousinofVictorhiscreatorwhohesavesfrom
drowninginariverandisrewardedwithrocksthrownathisheadandhehasthe
superhumanphysicalprowessofbeowulfinthebodyofashoddyHulk.
Makingpromisesyoudontkeep
FrankensteinsmonsterembodiestheheroismofancientGreece...(thentheessay
nevermentionsGreece)

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Introducethemostimportantideasofthetext
Expandjustenoughtoletthereaderknowwhattheywillbereading
Evidentinhisbenevolentinteractionswithahostilehumanity,Frankensteinsmonster
exhibitsaspectsofheroismsimilartoEpicheroesofGreekmyth.Themonsterisloath
to
killinnocentpeople,reminiscentof(anotherGreekherowhodidthesamething)...
The
mostfirmconnectionbetweenthecreatureandGreekheroesishisincrediblephysical
prowess,similarto
Pheidippideswhoranthefirstmarathon.
Athesisdoesnotalwaysneedtobeonesentence,unlessinstructedotherwise.

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