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The River Prophecy

This story is about Streamclan and Stormclan, how Stormclan saved


Streamclan by the great flood and it takes place in Moonclan on a
normal prophecy making.
(Moonclan= Ancient dead cats) (Prophecy= When they dream of a
warning in the future as a rhyme) (Omen= seeing something thats
warning of the future) (Cats that are known as deputy are next in
charge of leader and will be leader when the leader dies)
Chapter One {The Prophecy Telling}
Fire (Old leader of Stormclan) lashed his tail in annoyance, as Blue
(Old leader of Stormclan before fire) didnt think of the prophecy his
way. No! It means that Jay (Stormclan medicine cat apprentice) will
then save the Streamclan apprentice and then no one will die! Blue
shook her head No the Streamclan apprentice will have to die in
this prophecy. Streamclan any way has 3 other apprentices.
(Thistle, Tunnel, (Stick) and Flare) Fire narrowed his eyes Fine do it
your way His eyes had the glint of hostility and he padded away
lashing his tail.
Fire woke up in his chosen den in Moonclan. Fire was the one to tell
Willow (Streamclans medicine cat apprentice) about this prophecy;
he kept saying the prophecy over and over again in his head. The
water will come, the birds will fly, and only Storm will come to save
the Stream. (< The prophecy) Fire closed his eyes and made
himself go to Willows den in the crispy leaf-bare snow. He padded to
Willow seeing Moth (medicine cat of Streamclan also willows
mentor) lying still like a rock and he tapped Willow on the back with
his paw.
Willow was awake and stared at Fire, she wondered why the
Stormclan leader had come to tell her this prophecy, and does it
have anything to do with Stormclan? She listened to him as he
spoke the words of a prophecy The water will come, the birds will
fly, and only Storm will come to save the Stream Willow stared at
him in shock as he disappeared No wait! What does this mean?
she yowled, but he disappeared only his stale scent stayed there.
Willow lashed her tail Why go! I need to know what this means,
she muttered. She padded in circles and then lay down in her mossy
nest and drifted into a dark sleep. It felt like a heart beat later the
sun was shining through the cave into the medicine cat den and
Moth her mentor was shorting out herbs.

Finally your awake! she her mentor meowed Willow sat up shaking
the clumps of moss in her pelt. I had a prophecy last night she
told Moth.
When Willow had told her everything when the Stormclan leader Fire
came, she looked at Moth wondering if the cat would tell the leader.
I will go tell Misty (leader of Streamclan) this prophecy maybe she
knows, but Im worried it has to do with Stormclan since Fire said it
and it has the word Thunder in it Moth meowed. Soon Moth came
back and nodded to Willow She thinks that somethings bad going
to happen and Stormclan can save us she meowed wearily.

Chapter 2 {The Stinging Rain}


Two days after Willow had told the prophecy to Moth she had been
checking everything around the territory if there were foxes,
badgers, adders or anything that could kill a cat. She came across a
foxs den and she looked in side it sniffing it was stale but about a
few days old. She looked around hoping that the fox wouldnt come
back she herd a rustling in the bushes and she yowled in alarm but
it was only the dawn patrol. Reed (Deputy of Streamclan) leading
the patrol with Stick, (<Streamclan apprentices >) Thistle and
splash (normal warrior) behind him Why are you here next to a
foxs den Willow! The deputy meowed strictly. I was looking for
any omens! And dont talk to your medicine cat like that! she
demanded. Reed narrowed his eyes Just get away from the den so
the fox doesnt come he meowed a bit calmer.
Later the patrol had come back to camp and told Misty what
happened Moonclan will send you omens when its time she
meowed to Willow. Willow dipped her head slightly Ok, but they
must be soon she meowed.
Misty padded back into her den fading into the darkness and Willow
headed back to her den as well. Willow told Moth what happened
So that fox den isnt part of it because its meant to do will flowing
water or even over flowing water! she meowed quickly. Well we
cats never now when its going to happen we will have to wait for
it to happen she looked at Willow so she would be listening.
The next day the Streamclan warriors saw thick dark clouds coming
from were the mountains were the tribe lives they were moving
slowly, but they would be there at the camp the next day. Let all
Cats old enough to swim through the rivers join me beneath the
high-rock for a clan meeting! Misty stars yowl rang through the
camp as the warriors gathered below the rock. Streamclan has
spotted some dark clouds heading for the forest from the mountains
we must be ready for the worst! she yowled above the thunder
they could already hear from the clouds rolling into Pineclans

territory. Warriors go into patrols gather brambles and vines


anything you can find to block dens fully! she yowled as the
warriors ran around into groups to find brambles and moss.
When the warriors had finished placing more then they needed on
the dens they scrambled inside and two warriors were in the nursery
guarding the 2 moon old four kits there were. Two warriors must be
in each den then the others in the warriors den I will have my
deputy in my den! Misty yowled against the rain pouring down
flattening their glossy pelts. Willow saw two warriors run into the
apprentices den when two were heading for her and Moths den.
Inside Willow! One of the warriors Sun yowled as Birch ran inside
the den. All the drying herbs are inside in the split rock were we
supply our herbs Moth meowed. Good we should survive this
Birch meowed lashing his tail peaking outside seeing glittering eyes
from the other dens.
Chapter 3 {The Flood}
Misty shivered the breeze was coming into her den and Reed was
next to her shivering too. What if theres lighting or even worse
a flood or those wind tunnels that connect to the clouds she
thought as she panicked. Will Streamclan survive? She heard the
faint mewling from the nursery and the apprentices yowling from
the thunder. Soon a bolt of lighting strike she saw the flash outside
and then her den got plummeted with river water washing her and
Reed out of the den. He-Help! her head went under the water as
the water pushed her away.
She managed to pull her head up from the water and saw she was
pulled into Stormclan territory already. She tried swimming like she
always did but the current was too strong but she could keep her
head above the water. Wait! Stay there! Misty heard a cat and she
turned her head but got dunked under again. She put her head up
again and saw stick (apprentice) handing onto a floating tree
branch; he was trying to swim to me faster then the current Misty!
Quick hold the log! he yowled. She tried pushing her legs forward
getting closer to the log and she outstretched a paw to grab it and
she dug her claws in. She then pulled herself above her so she was
crouching on top of it her claws dug in but there was no sign of
Stick.
Stick yowled as he plummeted into the water again as Misty pulled
herself up onto the log. He didnt have time to wail as he went
under and he pushed his hind legs on the muddy riverbed but his
hind paws got stuck in the mud. He tried wailing but bubbles just
came out of his mouth. He tried jamming his hind paws free but the
mud kept sucking him in more. His lungs were screaming for air but
he couldnt get to the surface. He saw a dark shape above him and
saw the log with a cat shadow falling on the water. At least Misty is
safe He thought but that moment Misty leaped into the water diving

down and grabbed him on the scruff, and pulled him to the surface
he gasped and vomited out water the log was still there getting
washed toward them.
Misty Pulled him above the surface and the log came at them like a
fox running for its first cat. Quick go under! Misty yowls but Stick
didnt have time and he got hit on the head from the log and his fur
got snagged in the sticks of the log and the log pulled him away.
No! Stick! There was no wail he got winded by the force of the log.
The log was going away but Misty clawed at it managing to force
two paws on the log as she and Stick got pulled away into the lake,
She pulled herself to the other side of the log since the water was
calmer here and she saw that there was no sign of Stick.
She heard a yowl and saw Jay, The Stormclan Medicine cat
swimming towards her. Whats happened In Streamclan? Jay
wearily meows. Flood She rasps out. Jay then took her by the
scruff and pulled her to the shore and placed her down. A patrol of
Stormclan cats came Grey at the lead with Rain, Sorrel (Stormclan
warriors) and Cherry (Stormclan apprentice) heading towards them
quickly.
Why is Misty in our territory? The old deputy demanded. Jay
looked back at Grey. Theres been a flood let her tell us what really
happened. He meowed firmly.
Chapter 4 {After The Flood}
After Misty had finished telling them to story she remembered Stick.
Stick must be dead now Grey mutters. I have to get back to my
clan! she yowls worriedly Jay nods and looks back at Grey and he
nodded to. The Stormclan patrol and Jay followed Misty into the
soggy brambles of Streamclan camp there were sticks some
longpaws (people) stuff too but no cats. We have to find my clan!
She whimpers she looked at were the nursery was, no kits no
queens were had they gone? She padded too were the nursery
was only a few bramble bushes stayed there and she saw torn out
fur from one of the queens Dawn (Queen with kits) We are
going to look around the lake! she meowed stiffly to the other
Stormclan cats.
Misty struggled to pad through the forest of thorny brambles as she
went to look for her lost clan mates. Reed! Dont die! She yowls as
she struggled on her wobbly legs but she kept going on. She heard a
yowl and she started running and she heard the Stormclan patrol
running after her as well. She stopped looking down at Dawn lying
down in elder bushes Dawn! Misty gasps. Dawn opens her eyes
glaring up at her leader will fear in her eyes. Misty. find my
kits. She rasps and then closed her eyes going limp forever. No!
Dawn please! she begged Moonclan not to take her but she was

already dead. The Stormclan patrol watched sadly too Come on we


need to go before anyone else dies. Grey meows.
Before long they herd mewling somewhere and Misty quickly trotted
of ahead and came back with one of Dawn kits Fern (kitten of
dawns) she thought she placed it down in front of Sorrel to carry.
Sorrel picked the kit up and nods and pads after Misty. Misty
strained her ears for any more of the Ferns two brothers but there
was no sign of them. She bent down sniffing at every tree and
bramble bushes she went past she did see some tufts of fur caught
on sticks. She kept passing on the Stormclan cats following with
Fern she soon herd rustling in the bushes and Reed came limping
out Misty! he meows faintly.
Misty ran up to him Your not dead! she wails Offcourse Im not!
He meows happily. Have you seen anyone else? She meows
worriedly. He shook his head Sorry but I have seen tufts of fur. He
sadly meows. She droops her tail and drags it alone with Reed
padding the same pace as her and the Stormclan cats following. She
kept on padding till she came to Pineclan territory and the
Thunderpath (Road) in front of her. She stopped and looked around
and saw that Ferns brother Steel (Ferns brother still kittens) under a
sleeping monster (car). Steel looked at her with fear in his eyes and
Fern starts wailing. Then another Monster started coming to sleep
next to that monster Steel! Misty Yowls as the Monster turned and
started moving back (parking beside the other monster)
Chapter 5 {the survivors}
Fern Wailed loudly watching Steel leap from under the monster and
just dodged the paw (wheel) of one of the still moving monsters.
Steel Quick! Misty yowls, Steel came running forward and the
monster behind him stopped and two Longpaws came out one with
a long stick and cobweb at the end (Net) Steel finally came and
looked back seeing the two Longpaws yowling with there stumpy
front paws in the air. Quick! They must not catch us! She yowls as
Rain picked up Steel quickly and started running deep into
Streamclans territory. Soon they arrived at Streamclans camp and
looked around but all the dens were soaking and ruined. Medicine
cat den quick! She yowled and the cats rushed to the stone den
witch was the biggest den. They crowded in the medicine cat den
and they scented another cat, two cats now.
Two cats walked out from the shadows in the den, light creamy and
dark grey Moth and Willow! she suddenly remembered Moth
Willow how did you survive? She asked quickly. The flood didnt
reach that far in the medicine cat den Moth responds. Then
wheres Sun and Birch? She meows looking around quickly. Oh,
They got washed away they were guarding the den they didnt
expect the current to be that strong. She whimpers. Misty drooped

her head sadly We should go start finding them, leave the kits here
moth you can stay and guard these kits she meows. Misty
beckoned the other cats to follow her leaving the two kits with moth
in the den.
As Misty padded through the forest every now and then she yowled
the names Sun! Birch! there was no luck till she heard her name
answering her Misty! Is it you? Sun yowls from somewhere. Misty
ran toward his voice and found him drying his fur on a rock too tied
to get up Sun! Im so glad to find you! She meowed to the warrior.
Yes I also found flare He meowed, Misty looked around wh- Flare
came rushing in with a black bird in his jaws and dropped it Misty!
The apprentice yowled happily. Misty ran towards him "Im so glad
youre alive!" She purred happily. "Have you found stick? I thought
he went on a log, last time I saw him he was..." Misty flattened her
hears drooping her tail low. "He... is dead Misty whimpers sadly
her eyes looked up at flare, she felt very small now seeing two of
her cats die. Flare whimpered sadly he looked at Misty It was a
flood Im sure someone was meant to die she sniffled.
Misty stood up more But theres still more cats to save before they
die. She meowed and lashed her tail. Come on she meows and
she padded with the cats following, she was padding towards the
lake. Her ears pricked and her mouth open for any scent to come
she could only smell more rain will come but only a faint scent of
cats. She came to the shore of the lake sniffing every were picking
up thistles scent she suddenly bopped her head up she could see
his paws marks across the sand and saw a cat walking down the
lake. Thistle! She screeches he kept walking and she began to run
to him screeching his name then his ears flickered and turned
seeing Misty. Misty! he meows happily running up and saw his
friend flare behind her. Flare! Im glad youre alive, havent found
Stick yet? He meows. Uh, yes but. Flare mummers sadly. He is
now hunting with Moonclan we have to go before anyone else
goes! Misty cut him of and lashed her tail for the cats to follow her
back into the forest. Thistle stood there in shock that a cat had died
but then got over it and followed the cats catching up next to Flare.

Chapter 6 {Deadly fish}


Misty went on sniffing every bramble, twig, tree, bush, leaf she
could find she soon came across a whiff scent of dead fish. She went
on following the scent and it got stronger and stronger till she saw 8
tail lengths (meters) each way of fish stacked up on the ground and
blocked by bramble bushes it was like draining the water. She saw
Birch sitting down chewing on a fish its meat looked stringy and
dark. Birch! She yowls; Birch turns around and ran to her only just
stumbling landing face first in the fish. You know Misty these fish

arent that off! He meows and stood up looking at all the scared
dehydrated fish. Yeah right they could kill you maybe if you eat
to much. Birch looked at the fish. Well I have eaten just, three.
Birch meows, Im sure it wont hurt me! He looks at Misty and
leaped of the fish and onto the real ground seeing the Stormclan
cats his back fur bristled up. Birch crept forward and sniffed all of
the cats, Stormclan Why are they here? He paws his nose trying
to get the scent of. Well they saved me from drowning. She
meows, But come on we need to keep going before anyone dies.
Im sure no one wi- He coughs up the fish and gets caught in his
throat and he drops to the ground. Willow suddenly ran forward and
looked not sure what to do. How will I fix this surely no cat can get
fish out of there throat! Willow whimpers.
Misty stares at him in shock, Will he survive? Misty meows in
shock. No, I dont think so She whimpers flattening her ears
looking down at him. Birch coughs more and blood came out as well
as fish and he soon laid still not breathing or moving just motionless.
Misty touched noses with him for the last time, He was a fine
hunter and fighter but now he hunts with Moonclan. She dips her
head at the dying warrior. She looked up and saw the sun going
down and she sighed, Its been a long day Grey, you can lead
your warriors back to your camp, and thanks for your help. She
dips her head shakily and watched him lead his warriors back.
Come on lets go back to camp. She meows looking at the warriors
and saw Willow still staring at the dead warrior, We cant just leave
him here! She whimpers. We will get him in the morning Willow,
We need to get a big rest. She meowed harshly and padded of with
the warriors fallowing and Willow dragged on behind.
Misty came into camp heading straight for the medicine cat den and
saw Moth sleeping with the two kits next to her. She left Moth alone
and went back outside seeing the cats pad into their dens stretching
out there legs. Misty padded into her caved out rock and laid down
in the mossy bed and went into a deep sleep straight away. It felt
like a heartbeat later when sun rays

I like the way your story is very exciting.


I suggest you try and explain who the cats are more specifically.
GOOD JOB

Fire Stormclan Tom Leader (Dead)


Firestar Thunderclan Tom Leader (Dead)

Misty Streamclan She-cat


Leader Riverclan She-cat
Mistystar
Leader

Grey Stormclan Tom


WarriorThunderclan Tom Elder
Greystripe

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