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1st Grade Quest English -

Final
Draft of

Oops
by Arthur Geisert

The peaceful pig family was happy with their house by the river
in the country.
The pig family names were Oliver, Tony, Brittiny, Mama and
Papa. Oliver was the youngest. Tony was the middle aged child and
Brittiny was oldest.
They were eating, and Oliver spilled his milk and it was starting
to go down the airvent. While Momma and Poppa are cleaning some
of the milk, the rest of the milk went down stairs.
The milk fell on to the pan, which got heavey and started to tip.
The pan fell off the table. The pan poured out. The milk hit the
screw driver. The screw driver hit the swich to the wood cutter and
sent the blades spining.
The wire got cut because the saw cut it. And the thing
controlling the string was spinning too fast!
Then the wire cut off! Because the Wires snapped and the
string streched and the cart fell on the wagon the string broke.
Then the wagon rolled down the porch and it sawed the suport
column.
And one suport column was sawed off. Then another suport
column and then the house broke down.

The house was about to fall. The pigs didnt no what was
happining! The brick wall started to fall down too. The pipe came
through the brick wall. The boulder was about to fall on the house!
but the pigs were okay!
The pipe burst and knocked the red bricks out of the wall. The
house started to fall! And then Momma and Poppa pig fell sideways!
After the pipe draned, the tree fell and hit the boulder. That
crashed the house. Then it was double-crashed because of the tree
and the wire.
The tree gets tangled in the telephone wire and the wire breaks
because the tree falls sideways, and the water pipe burst open,
When the transformer hits the boulder the Boulder fell down
the cliff.
The boulder is falling off the clif and about to fall on top of the
house.
The boulder crashed in the middle of the house and the pig
family is watching sort of in the cornerr were the house Stood.
Luckily everyone is okay. The weather vane went flying into the air.
The explosion was evreywhere.
The tree house was nearly lieing on the ground. But the pigs
were safe. After the electric wire fell and the bolder crashed the

house. After that Momma and Poppa pig whatched to see if Brittiny
Oliver and Tony were allright and they were ok. As they wished.
The house was crushed and everything was smooshed. And
Momma, Poppa, Oliver, Tony, and Brittiny were upset.
They went in a safe corner so, they did not get hit by the
boulder. The house was crushed, but the pig family were safe from
the boulder.
Oliver told what he thoght had happened. Moma and Popa
forgave him and they were happy once again!
The End

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