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Essay Wiliam Golding Valentina Morelli
Essay Wiliam Golding Valentina Morelli
Mr.Hill
Valentina Morelli 10a
03/23/1015
William Golding
The writer probably knows what he meant when he wrote a
book, but he should immediately forget what he meant when
he's written it. -William Golding
William Golding was an author very famous, he was born on
September 19 of 1911, in Saint Columb Minor, Cornwall,
England. This author is very well recognized because of his
first book, Lord of the Flies. It was his most acclaimed novel,
it is about a group of boys who where on a plane crash and
they then have to survived on a desert island.
Golding was raised by his parents, his mother, Mildred, was
a women who fought for womens right to vote, his father,
Alex, was a schoolmaster. William study at the same school
his father works, Marlborough Grammar School. At the age
of 12 years old, William couldnt write an essay ?are you
sure He was a frustrated kid, he found a way of having fun
and spreading (spending?) his time by bulling his peers, he
enjoyed hurting people, he said it*. The author attend
Brasenose College at Oxford University. (This sentence
doesnt seem to be doing anything or going anywhere?)
Alex, his father His father Alex, had the dream that some day
his son would become a scientist, but, he proved it wrong
William decides to study English literature(but he proved him
wrong by deciding to sounds more natural). In 1934 after
high
fully addresses all parts of the task
presents a fully developed position in
answer to the question with relevant,
fully
extended and well supported ideas
Coherence and
Cohesion
Lexical Resource
low
barely responds to the
task
does not express a
position
may attempt to present
one or two ideas
but there is no
development
has very little control of
organizational
features
uses an extremely
limited range
of vocabulary;
20-0
Grade
12
20-0
17
20-0
16
Paragraphs
Capitalization and
punctuation.
essentially no
control of word
formation and/or
spelling
cannot use sentence
forms except in
memorized phrases
Student fails to use
formatting
20-0
14
10
10
100-0
total
79