Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Hardnewsrubric
Hardnewsrubric
Stage
Appropriate(3)
Developing(2)
NeedsWork/Missing(1/0)
Headline
Headlineisshort(under10
words),tothepoint,no
extraneouswords(cohesive
devices,conjunctions,etc.),
clearlynewsworthy
Headlineisslightlytoowordy Headlineismissing,orfar
and/orwritteninan
toowordy.
inappropriatetoneand/orfails
toconveynewsworthiness
Dateline,
Lede
Hasappropriatedateline
Ledeanswers
who/what/when/where/why
asquicklyaspossible
Writteninneutrallanguage,
appropriatetone,thirdperson
Ledefailstoanswer5Ws,or
doesnotaddressthemquickly
enough
Occasionallywrittenin2nd
or1stperson
Sentencesaretooshort,not
packedwithenough
information
Missingeitherdatelineor
lede,orboth
Notconsistentlywrittenin
thethirdperson
Nutgraphs
(Inanutshell
paragraphs)
Neutrallanguage,
declarativetone
Developsthelede,explains
thebroadercontext
Appropriateuseofquotes
(directorindirect)from
relevant,crediblesources
Failstodeveloplede
sufficiently,doesnotexplain
broadercontext
Doesnotincludeanyquotes
Writteninainterrogativeor
imperativetone
Doesnotincludequotesor
explainbroadercontext
Body
Includesfactsand/orfigures
thatprovidegreatercontext
orfurtherdemonstrate
importanceofthestory,
and/ormorequotes(director
indirect)thatintroduce
feelings/reactions
Providesspottyor
Failstoprovidecontext
insufficientcontext,using
fewornoquotes,facts,and/or
figures
End/Kicker
Endswithaquoteor
statementthatcapturesthe
moodofthestorywithout
summarizing
Endswithasummaryor
conclusion,oraquotethatis
notquiteappropriate
Endswithasummaryor
conclusion
Total:
___/15
points