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Yours Faithfully C
Mee Sarasas
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This is a good letter of application for the post of club organiser. There is
sufficient information in the letter for the reader to judge your application. A
little more detail (as I highlighted) would have given Mrs Sykes more to
make a decision on and increased the word length. Your grammatical control
is very good and your vocabulary is mostly varied (apart from your over-use
of 'also'!) I have corrected a couple of minor points but this is generally a
pleasing answer.