Firoozeh Dumas

Cynthia Rodriguez

14569 Rebel st.

13782 Sierra st.

Silicon Valley NY 82102

P.Valley CA 91331

Dear Mrs. Dumas,

Your story was really deep and inspired me to want to continue reading it as it went
on. The fact that you started your introduction by giving me examples of your
cousins names and what they mean was a great start. You described that you knew
coming to America as an immigrant meant you were going to face challenges and
that was a great introduction to your story as well. I didnt like how you changed
your name because of what others concerns were. Although, you knew changing it
would only be a positive outcome in America. You should be proud of your culture
and where you come from. I understand that it may have been tough for other
people; such as Americans to pronounce your name, but you should have been
honest with those people you met through time when they met you as Julie. I like
how you emphasized the idea that when you changed into your American name you
began to notice all the calls, and interviews you received. I wish you would of
explained more on how you managed to deal with your experience meeting your
husband. Did you tell your husband Julie wasnt your real name when you first met
him? Or did you wait until after time went by to tell him? I am asking because I am
only concerned. You only mentioned your husband once in the story. I also like the
fact that you had confirmed with your parents first before you decided to change
your name to an American name. I can feel the pressure you had as I read your
narrative. I like how you said that you had to untangle the knot by going back to

your real name and you didnt care who were to judge you because you decided to
be a stay at home mom. Overall I enjoyed reading your story. You gave great details
and remember to never be ashamed of where you come from, nor let the
judgements of others effect you as a person Firoozeh.
Best of wishes,

Cynthia Rodriguez
Cynthia Rodriguez