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Run-ons
Fragments
Reading discussion
Fragments
Run-ons
English 101_FA15
Fragments
Fragments
Spotting Fragments
Spotting Fragments
Dependent words
after, although, as, as if, because, before, even though,
how, if, since, so that, than, that, though, unless, until,
when, where, whether, which, while, who, whom,
whose, why
Spotting Fragments
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Run-Ons
Run-Ons
Fused sentence
We went to the beach last summer I learned to surf.
Comma splice
We went to the beach last summer, I learned to surf.
Run-Ons
Run-Ons
Practice
Newsletter Practice
one line under subjects, two lines under verbs
While discussing the subject of acronyms lets examine a
doctor of chiropractics purpose DC = doctor of cause.
Chiropractors and chiropractic patients understand that all
disease has a cause and focus on removing it so the body
can heal. Not maintaining disease through drugs.
Chiropractic understands that the human body is
conceived by two cells. Those two simple cells share
responsibility for creating life. Chiropractic understands
that the very first organ those cells develop is a brain, then
from that brain comes the spinal cord, then like branches
growing on a tree come the nerves and finally like fruit at
the end of those branches grows organs. Since all life starts
with the central nervous system, then it must maintain life
and health. The healthier the nervous system the healthier
the body, chiropractors understand this fundamental law
of the body and maximize the nervous system through
adjustments.
Newsletter Practice
one line under subjects, two lines under verbs
While discussing the subject of acronyms lets examine a
doctor of chiropractics purpose DC = doctor of cause.
Chiropractors and chiropractic patients understand that all
disease has a cause; They focus on removing it, so the
body can heal. The point is to not maintain disease
through drugs. Chiropractic understands that the human
body is conceived by two cells. Those two simple cells
share responsibility for creating life. Chiropractic
understands that the very first organ those cells develop is
a brain, then from that brain comes the spinal cord, then
like branches growing on a tree come the nerves and
finally like fruit at the end of those branches grows organs.
Since all life starts with the central nervous system, then it
must maintain life and health. The healthier the nervous
system, the healthier the body, chiropractors understand
this fundamental law of the body and maximize the
nervous system through adjustments.
Newsletter Practice
Freewriting
Given a topic
Write for given time
Do not stop writingif you get stuck, pick a word
and just keep writing it until your next thought
comes through
Which reading did you like the most? Why? Which
narrative elements kept your attention?
Groupings Monday
Tayah, Jocelyn, Kymmen - purpose
Andrew, Adam, John- action
Aliyah, Chamira, Tyrell - conflict
Zach, Chris, Mattie point of view
Kim, Josh, Jordan, Logan key events
Kamyn, Perri, Hannah, Jasmine W. - dialogue
Brock, Jasmine T., Elizabeth, Regan ethics
Groupings Tuesday
Dani, Kayla, Chris D., Catherine - purpose
Adrian, Chris G., Corrine - action
Kaprielle, LaBrayla, Stephen - conflict
Kelsey, Victoria, Michael, Tanya point of view
Sabrina, Bryce, Olabisi key events
Chris R., Joanna, Danielle - dialogue
CJ, Haley, Tonee, Julie ethics
Jigsaw!
Meet in the following groups. Share your knowledge of
your previously assigned element with the group.
The purpose is for all group members to fully
understand all of the elements in each of the
readings.
Narrative Analysis
Choose ONE of the readings
Write a 3-4 page essay discussing the effectiveness
of the authors narration techniques
o Writing process; MLA format
o Introduction
o Body paragraphs
o Conclusion
o Grammar & mechanics
For Wednesday/Thursday
Sign up for a conference slot
o please only come at that time
o Those who were absent 9/21 or 9/22, come at
regular class timeI will fit you in when I can.
Rough draft conferences 9/23 or 9/23
Peer review rough drafts 9/28 or 9/29
Final copy due 9/30 or 10/1
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Those who were absent 9/21 or 9/22, come at regular class timeI will fit you in
when I can.
Randall
Chamira
John
Perri
Brock
Zac
Kim
Elizabeth
Tayah
Jocelyn
Hannah
Adam
Thori
Chris
Jordan
Josh
Mattie
Jasmine
Tyrell
Kamyn