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Well-done Ana! Excellent use of linkers! Keep up the

1. As far as I am concerned, playing a music instrument is similar


to learning a different language. Due to the fact you have to
pay attention to the smallest details. Moreover, you must do a
lot of exercises.
2. As far as I am concerned, driving a car is similar to learning a
different language. Due to the fact you cant loose your
attention focus while practicing that.
3. As far as I am concerned, doing a dangerous sport is similar to
learning a different language. Due to the fact you have to
have courage to start practicing both of them.
4. As far as I am concerned, painting is similar to learning a
different language. Due to the fact you can experience a
different vision of life.
5. The way I see it, dancing the tango is similar to learning a
different language. Due to the fact you can learn about other
cultures in one lesson.
6. As far as I am concerned, playing a board game is similar to
learning a different language. Due to the fact you cant stop of
practicing. In a nutshell, the more you practice the better you
get.
7. In my opinion, cell phones have helped communication. Due
to the fact you can talk with to anyone you need anytime of
day. In addition, you can check your email. In a nutshell, you
can be connecting(ed) with world.
8. In my opinion, social medias have brought people closer. Due
to the fact you can talk with to your friends and family that
live far from you in with just one click. For this reason, social
medias keep people closer, even if they live thousand of
kilometers away.
9. To my mind, the most negative effect that technology has had
on communication is losing the physical contact with someone
that you really miss. However, with the social medias you can
listen to their voice, share pictures and messages with this
person.

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